The CWS3 Discussion Thread: Praise God, it's finished.

[John Mora]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

Hooray.

Glad to hear it.

[TheHonorableRyu]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

Around 4,000 words now. I think it will be 6000-6500 total when it's done.

[John Mora]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[John Mora]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

A few more beats went by without either talking when Adam suddenly asked, “What do you think of Arc?”

“Huh? About Arc?!” Cay asked, wondering what he could mean.

“Well, what kind of guy is he?”

Cay decided to probe a little more, now that she had caught him with his pants down, so to speak. “Haven’t you ever done the same thing?”

Silence, then, “…No…” Adam reluctantly mumbled.

Cay was a little surprised. “You mean you haven’t courted a girl, ever?!” she asked, incredulous.

“It’s been tough!” Adam exclaimed, defensively. “We’re always on the move and doing dangerous things… plus I’m poor and I have my training to keep up on! I don’t have time!”

“But hasn’t there ever been a girl you WANT to make time for?”

“I don’t wanna talk about this,” he sulked.

OMG GAY

[Caciss]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

[Magik]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

Oh yeah, I might as well say it now: I'll be out of town from May 31st - June 18th-ish

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

Probably won't be too much of a problem, since Mora is after Ryu, anyways.

EDIT: Whoops, I read that wrong. I thought it said June 8th, not 18th. That might be an issue. If Ryu and Mora have both their additions finished before then (and it would be so cool if they did), I will gladly take the spot and you can write after me.

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

It's time for another addition of GOOD NEWS/BAD NEWS.

GOOD NEWS first:
I'm finished doing the chronological editing of the entire CWS3 up to this point! It's been an interesting 548 pages, and I'm relieved it's over. I'll have the super funtabulous USELESS STATISTICS ready to post next week.

BAD NEWS:
I have some backediting that must be done. There are a few things that Mora and I have discussed that require changing throughout the story, but it'll only take me a day's worth of editing to accomplish. They were tiny little continuity errors that we never noticed before, and I have a list of... four that need to be changed. I'll be doing that on Monday after I post the final back addition, and on Tuesday, I'll prepare the Useless Statistics for official Discussion topic posting.

So it's not really bad news at all. Just neutral news.

I will say this: Ryu is still the overall word count leader, but not by very much. Seems that Mora, with his two additions in a row, and his stupendously long addition, has very nearly caught up to him. I'm one addition's worth of words from catching Mora, and Omni is still number 4 in the standings. But Magik is quickly catching up!

That's all for now.

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

It's almost definitely going to be Tuesday before I post the final backlogged addition. Tomorrow morning, I'm going to be predisposed.

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

It seems as though my initial estimates were extremely close. With the exclusion of the entire portion of Talus's reminiscing, the story stands at 437 pages with book formatting. With Talus's scene, it would have been 439 pages. My initial estimation of 440 pages was almost 100%. Go me. Anyway, tomorrow, I'll be fixing up those few continuity errors throughout the story, and the day after that, I'll see about getting the Useless Statistics up to date and posted.

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

Alright, here are the things that needed changing and how I changed them. I didn't change them for the forum, as it wasn't really necessary, but the formatted version of the story has been changed appropriately.

1. First concept was the idea that Guillermo has this ability to 'sense' people and things' presences. After careful review of everything that contributes to this idea, I've decided that nothing needs to be changed, because while you can try to infer that he does have this special 'extra' sense, it's easier to infer that he's just using his new enhanced touch sensitivity to vibrations to figure out who's around. He wouldn't use it all the time because he's still getting used to it. It is important, however, to note that from the current point of the story, people shouldn't be able to jump out and go BOOGA BOOGA to surprise and scare him, as he would know they were there already.

2. The point I made about Magik's addition with Talus's background negated this need. It was the inclusion of one of Talus's sons - Darius - that sparked a problem, initially. We have a Trenton Darius on the High Council of Anteron, and it doesn't do to have overlapping names in stories for independent people. This has been solved because I removed the entire portion that focuses on Talus, removing the mention of his son, Darius.

3. This concept occurred in the 3rd Book, Ryu's addition, page 131 of the formatted version. I quote:

At Sasha’s resting point lay the occasional slab of stone, and a dilapidated wooden fence with a door to its gate missing surrounded it in sketchy stretches. It was probably an abandoned cemetery, and laying eyes on the black, dead trees that checkered the site, anyone would have called it a cemetery for trees as well. Sasha wandered past a dirty clump of logs that used to be a cabin and found their airship. She smiled; despite their recent rift in opinion, she and Aleksi thought very much alike when it came to plotting. The airship now had two mammoth wings attached to it with a harpoon gun under each of them, as well as an artillery cannon sticking out from the back of the ship. Now she knew what exactly Aleksi had been out doing the night before they left Baines: knowing that they might need the extra firepower, he must have hired one of the groups of rogue mechanics they had dealings with in the past to perform the upgrade and then drop it off here—at their hidden relay point for all of their operations around Baines, just outside of the normal routes for the towns wandering hunters and travelers. With its battering ram retracted, the airship had looked pedestrian and innocent enough while it was parked in Baines, but with its new weapons, it would have aroused suspicion, so Aleksi had it delivered here. They also needed the ship as small and light as possible for smuggling it aboard The Inspiration. Knowing the enhancements (and the repairing of the damages done to the craft while in the Zephyr Gate) would take a couple days to finish, and that Sasha would eventually compulsively want to find the airship, Aleksi had cunningly arranged for this all to happen.

About to enter, Sasha was suddenly interrupted by a whistle of one of the two meddlers that she knew had been following her. She had playfully thought it wise to lead them as far away from their other three companions as possible. She turned to face them—they were only thirty feet away—and nonchalantly drew her scythe.

After some fact-checking, realization washed over me when I realized that a later addition by Mora, page 201 of the formatted version, and subsequently the following addition by IRC on page 203, ended up slightly messing this fact up. I quote:

From Mora -

“Hey, Aleksi scratches my back, I scratch his, you know? As for your other question, I know enough. But I’m not stupid enough to go prying into that, myself, though. If you guys want to revolutionize the world, that’s your business. Just don’t screw up mine, right?”

Sasha massaged her temples with her fingers. Aleksi had brought in someone new without consulting her – for the second time. They were going to have a little “talk” soon, that much was for certain.

From IRC -

Sasha sat at the end of the pier watching Dedalus work on the airship. It seemed that everything that had been happening since she and Aleksi had left Solis Du Teplo had formed a dull ache right behind her temples. And now this Dedalus guy was working on the airship and she knew nothing about it. It was almost enough to make her cry. But that hadn’t happened since she had met Aleksi, and that business with the red-head didn’t count, so far as she concerned herself. Instead, she closed her eyes and began to mentally organize all the things that were bothering her. For starters, Bastraglon was tagging along with them now, and she figured the only person who wouldn’t be unnerved by him was Aleksi. There were only a few members of their group that she knew of, fewer than five dozen in fact, so she had never seen Bastraglon before, and was not used to him. She doubted she ever would be. Bastraglon had been with the organization for decades and the effect Dobbel had on him was apparent. Aside from his looks, his mind was also affected. It seemed like he would retreat into some far corner of it at times, and then pop out unexpectedly to make some random comment. She wouldn’t be surprised if he had been sitting motionless in Solis Du Teplo for months. She could go for a few days without food or water now and Aleksi longer still, so who knew how often Bastraglon ate or drank.

The dissention from Aleksi that Sasha had kept doing is slightly driven by this later in the story. To avoid messing with far more of the story than I needed, I opted to insert a small paragraph into Ryu's page 131 addition that asserts her disgruntlement, but allows for the thought to slip away for the time being, The addition is bolded.

At Sasha’s resting point lay the occasional slab of stone, and a dilapidated wooden fence with a door to its gate missing surrounded it in sketchy stretches. It was probably an abandoned cemetery, and laying eyes on the black, dead trees that checkered the site, anyone would have called it a cemetery for trees as well. Sasha wandered past a dirty clump of logs that used to be a cabin and found their airship. She smiled; despite their recent rift in opinion, she and Aleksi thought very much alike when it came to plotting. The airship now had two mammoth wings attached to it with a harpoon gun under each of them, as well as an artillery cannon sticking out from the back of the ship. Now she knew what exactly Aleksi had been out doing the night before they left Baines: knowing that they might need the extra firepower, he must have hired one of the groups of rogue mechanics they had dealings with in the past to perform the upgrade and then drop it off here—at their hidden relay point for all of their operations around Baines, just outside of the normal routes for the towns wandering hunters and travelers. With its battering ram retracted, the airship had looked pedestrian and innocent enough while it was parked in Baines, but with its new weapons, it would have aroused suspicion, so Aleksi had it delivered here. They also needed the ship as small and light as possible for smuggling it aboard The Inspiration. Knowing the enhancements (and the repairing of the damages done to the craft while in the Zephyr Gate) would take a couple days to finish, and that Sasha would eventually compulsively want to find the airship, Aleksi had cunningly arranged for this all to happen.

Despite her smirk, she found herself slightly annoyed that – while she would have done the same – Aleksi didn’t divulge any of the plotting or plans to her. They were not equals, true enough, but Aleksi seemed to enjoy leaving her out of things. At present she did not have time to dwell on this, and so pushed it aside.

About to enter, Sasha was suddenly interrupted by a whistle of one of the two meddlers that she knew had been following her. She had playfully thought it wise to lead them as far away from their other three companions as possible. She turned to face them—they were only thirty feet away—and nonchalantly drew her scythe.

That almost completely fixes the problem with minimal editing, and I inserted an afterthought in Mora's page 201 addition to complete the thought. Edit is bolded:

Sasha massaged her temples with her fingers. Aleksi had brought in someone new without consulting her – for the second time. They were going to have a little “talk” soon, that much was for certain

4. Several times throughout Arguile and Hardin's flight to follow Gjigrajheth, Arguile focuses his thoughts on Malachai and what happened to him, wondering if he was okay, if he had found Guillermo, etc. In my page 234 addition, I completely left that idea on the floor to stomp on it, and Arguile never puts another thought towards Malachai. I quote:

“Arguile, you old dog! I can’t believe you’re still alive. It’s hard to believe after witnessing that attack,” Arc said excitedly.

Arguile said, “It’s good to see you two alive and well. But what happened to Guillermo? Did Malachai capture him? And who are your friends?” Arc and Seek introduced Acacia, Adam, and Elise, and they told the story about how Malachai’s ship was destroyed and Guillermo and the cult members were taken captive. Arguile then filled them in on what was happening in Antaross and how urgent it was to get back.

Seek got back to the subject at hand. “Captain, we understand the risk involved in going to Antaross, but we have to go. Will you allow us on the ship?”

Arguile sighed and shook his head. “I’m proud of you two. You have a friend and you want to save him. I respect that, and even though I don’t want any of you dying, I will let you all on my ship. We’re leaving shortly, though, so you’d better be ready to go when we are."

“Excuse me, Captain Arguile?" interrupted Adam, "Prince Ordic and the other three ships… they are the monster hunters, correct?”

“Well, yes, they are.”

“Would it be all right if we traveled on one of those ships instead? I realize you probably want to catch up with Seek and Arc further, but they asked us to train them as Hunters, so their time would be best spent with us, and we wish to talk with some of the other monster hunters to further our own skills.”

“Yes, I suppose I can arrange that. I’ll talk with Hardin and get it worked out. Now, if you all will excuse me, I have some important things to do. Good seeing you again, Seek, Arc. Nice meeting you Adam, Acacia, and Elise.”

They parted ways and waited for the sign to board ship.

Nowhere after this point does Arguile wonder or worry about Malachai, nor does he seem to care that his former crewmates had a hand in overthrowing Malachai. The bolded text is what I did to fix this.

Arguile said, “It’s good to see you two alive and well. But what happened to Guillermo? Did Malachai capture him? And who are your friends?” Arc and Seek introduced Acacia, Adam, and Elise, and they told the story about how Malachai’s ship was destroyed and Guillermo and the cult members were taken captive. Arguile winced noticeably during the bit about Malachai, but said nothing of it, filling them in on what was happening in Antaross and how urgent it was to get back.

To further fix this problem, I added some text to the narration when it's fixed upon Arguile's perspective in my same addition. Bolded text is new, and nothing else has changed.

A hundred yards ahead of Hardin’s ship flew Arguile’s ship. On the deck stood Captain Arguile, replaying Seek and Arc’s tale of flight from Malachai. At the time, he had stared dumbfounded listening to an unbelievable story. He hadn’t reacted on the spot, but was relieved to hear that Malachai’s ship was downed, but not so much that Malachai himself would be downed. It pained him to think of his former crewmen having a hand in his old friend’s rotten failure, but couldn’t blame them more than anything else. If luck was with them, Malachai would already be in Antaross gearing up for the attack. He mused that the difference between good luck and bad luck blurred quite well in this situation, as he didn’t know which manner of luck would bring the two of them to a fierce battlefield. He feared nothing more than to make it to Antaross too late and it be in complete disarray or worse, completely destroyed.

That was the lot of them. I hope they've been fixed to your satisfaction.

EDIT: I forgot a couple of minor things that I changed. I replaced every instance of Dobbel's "yur" with "your" instead. The overall count of times it was used in the story as "yur"? 47. I also completely removed the placemarkers in asterisks below every addition title, as they proved quite pointless. 92 additions worth of those removed several pages from the story, and we're down to 433 pages now overall.

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

More good news/bad news!

The bad news is that I left out two whole additions during my 'formatted version' copy/pasting. I left one of Ryu's from Book 2, and Magik's return addition from Book 3. They've both been reinserted into the formatted version, and it now stands at 447 pages long. That's the official page number for everything we've done insofar.

The good news is that I'm getting the Useless Statistics ready to post up, and will do so in about an hour!

[Big Rick Cook]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

And here it is! The entire Useless Statistics file I have thus far. First up: THE AWARDS!
The awards have been toned down to just top 3's and special awards, but I'll be posting indepth details on each writer later on, so if you want to see how you ranked on any one category, it's easy to check for yourself.

AWARDS

TOP 3 LONGEST POSTS
1. John Mora – his 12th, 88th overall Post, Page 368 = 14,260 words
2. Omnislash – his 5th, 66th overall Post, Page 181 = 13,588 words
3. Big Rick Cook – his 15th, 92nd overall Post, Page 427 = 12,462 words

TOP 3 SHORTEST POSTS
1. Garr – his 1st, 10th overall Post, Page 010 = 134 words
2. Inraged Cow – his 7th, 38th overall Post, Page 049 = 186 words
3. Inraged Cow – his 5th, 26th overall Post, Page 031 = 235 words

TOP 3 WRITERS WITH MOST # OF ADDITIONS (ties sorted by whoever got there first)
1. Big Rick Cook – 15 additions
2. The Honorable Ryu – 14 additions
3. John Mora – 13 additions

TOP 3 WRITERS WITH LEAST # OF ADDITIONS (ties sorted by whoever got there first)
1. Garr – 1 addition
1. Vanilla Ice T – 1 addition
3. Aznable – 2 additions
3. Patryn – 2 additions

TOP 3 WRITERS WITH MOST WORDS WRITTEN OVERALL
1. The Honorable Ryu – 62,019 words – 124 pages
2. John Mora - 59,656 words – 119 pages
3. Big Rick Cook – 51,469 words – 103 pages

TOP 3 WRITERS WITH LEAST WORDS WRITTEN OVERALL
1. Garr – 134 words
2. VanillaIceT – 586 words
3. Caciss – 1,681 words

TOP 3 HIGHEST AVERAGE WORD COUNTS PER POST
1. Omnislash – 5,682 words averaged out of 5 posts
2. John Mora – 4,588 words averaged out of 13 posts
3. The Honorable Ryu – 4,429 words averaged out of 14 posts

TOP 3 LOWEST AVERAGE WORD COUNTS PER POST
1. Garr – 134 words averaged out of 1 post
2. Caciss – 336 words averaged out of 5 posts
3. Vanilla Ice T – 586 words averaged out of 1 post

FIRST 3 POSTS TO HIT 1000 WORDS
1. Starba – her 2nd, 6th overall Post, Page 5 = 1,324 words
2. Aznable – his 1st, 18th overall Post, Page 18 = 1,021 words
3. Inraged Cow – his 3rd 21st overall Post, Page 22 = 1,020 words

FIRST 3 POSTS TO HIT 10,000 WORDS
1. Omnislash – his 5th, 66th overall Post, Page 181 = 13,588 words
2. Mora – his 12th, 88th overall Post, Page 368 = 14,260 words
3. Big Rick Cook – his 15th, 92nd overall Post, Page 427 = 12,462 words

POST OF EVIL AWARD:
Big Rick Cook – his 3rd, 32nd overall Post, Page 39 = 666 words

POST OF SEXY 69 AWARD:
Karim – her 3rd, 69th overall Post, Page 213 = 1,289 words

THE *GASP* HE’S BACK AWARD:
Magik - for having the largest gap in between two posts as of yet at 212 pages between his 1st and 2nd addition.

THE MANLOVE AWARD:
John Mora for his extensive manlove fetish regarding Adam and Hardin :b
And pretty much every other character in the story.

THE WALKING LEXICON AWARD:
The Honorable Ryu for confusing most casual readers!

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The next segment of our show includes the overall word count and page count of the story. The word count does not include 'Book,' 'Chapter,' or 'Writer's Post #' titles.

The overall page count of the story, at 92 additions thus far, is 447 pages with single-spaced paragraphs.

The overall word count of the story is 254,975 words!

The overall average word count per story addition is 2,771 words averaged out of 92 additions total!

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And now the entire rundown of the story, in chronological order, complete with post numbers, page numbers, and word counts!

CHRONOLOGY

Book 1
Chapter 1
1. Patryn1 – Page 1 – 989 words
2. Inraged Cow (IRC1) – Page 2 – 437 words
3. Starba1 – Page 3 – 389 words
4. Caciss1 – Page 4 – 267 words
5. Staffmaster (Staff1) – Page 4 – 286 words
6. Starba2 – Page 5 – 1,324 words
7. Vanilla Ice T1 (ViceT) – Page 7 – 586 words
8. Staff2 – Page 8 – 800 words

Chapter 2
9. Caciss2 – Page 10 – 343 words
10. Garr1 – Page 10 – 134 words
11. IRC2 – Page 10 – 594 words
12. Caciss3 – Page 12 – 308 words
13. Big Rick Cook (BRC1) – Page 12 – 532 words
14. Staff3 – Page 13 – 975 words
15. Starba3 – Page 15 – 939 words
16. Caciss4 – Page 17 – 280 words
17. Staff4 – Page 17 – 541 words
18. Aznable1 – Page 18 – 1,021 words
19. Starba4 – Page 20 – 528 words
20. Aznable2 – Page 21 – 592 words
21. IRC3 – Page 22 – 1,020 words

Chapter 3
22. Ryu1 – Page 25 – 700 words
23. Starba5 – Page 26 – 1,035 words
24. IRC4 – Page 28 – 991 words
25. Staff5 – Page 29 – 864 words
26. IRC5 – Page 31 – 235 words
27. Ryu2 – Page 31 – 2,419 words
28. Caciss5 – Page 35 – 483 words
29. BRC2 – Page 37 – 550 words
30. Starba6 – Page 37 – 406 words
31. IRC6 – Page 38 – 430 words
32. BRC3 – Page 39 – 666 words
33. Staff6 – Page 40 – 523 words
34. John Mora1 (Mora) – Page 41 – 557 words
35. BRC4 – Page 42 – 714 Words
36. Staff7 – Page 44 – 1,113 words
37. Patryn2 – Page 46 – 1,462 words

Book 2
Chapter 4
38. IRC7 – Page 49 – 186 words
39. Staff8 – Page 49 – 420 words
40. Ryu3 – Page 50 – 2,591 words
41. Mora2 – Page 54 – 671 words
42. IRC8 – Page 55 – 1,032 words
43. BRC5 – Page 57 – 1,397 words
44. Karim1 – Page 59 – 1,159 words
45. Magik1 – Page 61 – 569 words
46. Mora3 – Page 63 – 909 words
47. Ryu4 – Page 64 – 998 words
48. BRC6 – Page 66 – 944 words
49. Mora4 – Page 68 – 2,165 words
50. Omni1 – Page 72 – 3,091 words
51. Ryu5 – Page 78 – 5,030 words
52. BRC7 – Page 86 – 1,964 words

Chapter 5
53. IRC9 – Page 91 – 1,983 words
54. Karim2 – Page 94 – 1,028 words
55. Ryu6 – Page 96 – 2,232 words
56. Mora5 – Page 100 – 2,972 words
57. Omni2 – Page 104 – 3,517 words
58. Ryu7 – Page 111 – 5,490 words

Chapter 6
59. Mora6 – Page 121 – 2,885 words
60. Omni3 – Page 126 – 4,962 words
61. BRC8 – Page 134 – 2,634 words

Chapter 7
62. Ryu8 – Page 140 – 6,148 words
63. Omni4 – Page 150 – 3,255 words
64. BRC9 – Page 156 – 6,356 words

Book 3
Chapter 8
65. Ryu9 – Page 168 – 8,192 words
66. Omni5 – Page 181 – 13,588 words

Chapter 9
67. Mora7 – Page 205 – 3,496 words
68. IRC10 – Page 211 – 1,546 words
69. Karim3 – Page 213 – 1,289 words
70. BRC10 – Page 216 – 3,191 words
71. Ryu10 – Page 221 – 4,397 words
72. Mora8 – Page 229 – 4,847 words

Chapter 10
73. Karim4 – Page 238 – 1,267 words
74. BRC11 – Page 240 – 4,494 words
75. Ryu11 – Page 248 – 7,081 words

Chapter 11
76. Mora9 – Page 260 – 4,429 words
77. BRC12 – Page 267 – 3,344 words
78. Magik2 – Page 273 – 2,821 words
79. Ryu12 – Page 278 – 3,947 words
80. Mora10 – Page 284 – 7,026 words

Book 4
Chapter 12
81. BRC13 – Page 298 – 5,674 words
82. Magik3 – Page 307 – 3,757 words
83. Ryu13 – Page 313 – 5,382 words
84. Mora11 – Page 322 – 8,698 words

Chapter 13
85. BRC14 – Page 339 – 6,547 words
86. Magik4 – Page 349 – 3,544 words
87. Ryu14 – Page 355 – 7,412 words
88. Mora12 – Page 368 – 14,260 words
89. Magik5 – Page 392 – 6,469 words

Chapter 14
90. Mora13 – Page 404 – 6,741 words
91. Magik6 – Page 415 – 6,453 words
92. BRC15 – Page 427 – 12,462 words

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And here are the writer-specific rundowns, complete with everything from the Chronology, but also including overall word counts, overall page counts to give you a better idea of how much it actually is, and average words per addition! The writers are placed in the list as they joined the story, so we start with Patryn, and end with Omni. There is absolutely no bias placed on the listing here.

WRITERS

Patryn:
2 posts – 2,451 words and 5 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 1,225 words
Patryn 01 - Post 001 – page 1: 989 words
Patryn 02 – Post 037 – page 46: 1,462 words

InragedCow:
10 posts – 8,454 words and 17 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 845 words
IRC 01 – Post 002 - page 002: 437 words
IRC 02 – Post 011 - page 010: 594 words
IRC 03 - Post 021 – page 022: 1,020 words
IRC 04 – Post 024 - page 028: 991 words
IRC 05 - Post 026 – page 031: 235 words
IRC 06 – Post 031 - page 038: 430 words
IRC 07 - Post 038 – page 049: 186 words
IRC 08 – Post 042 – page 055: 1,032 words
IRC 09 – Post 053 – page 091: 1,983 words
IRC 10 – Post 068 – page 211: 1,546 words

Starba:
6 posts – 4,621 words and 9 Ό pages
Average Words Per Addition: 770 words
Starba 01 – Post 003 - page 003: 389 words
Starba 02 – Post 006 - page 005: 1,324 words
Starba 03 – Post 015 – page 015: 939 words
Starba 04 - Post 019 – page 020: 528 words
Starba 05 - Post 023 – page 026: 1,035 words
Starba 06 – Post 030 – page 037: 406 words

Caciss:
5 posts – 1,681 words – 3 ½ pages
Average Words Per Addition: 336 words
Caciss 01 - Post 004 – page 004: 267 words
Caciss 02 – Post 009 - page 010: 343 words
Caciss 03 – Post 012 – page 012: 308 words
Caciss 04 - Post 016 – page 017: 280 words
Caciss 05 – Post 028 – page 035: 483 words

Staffmaster:
8 posts – 5,522 words and 11 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 690 words
Staffmaster 01 - Post 005 – page 004: 286 words
Staffmaster 02 - Post 008 – page 010: 800 words
Staffmaster 03 - Post 014 – page 013: 975 words
Staffmaster 04 - Post 017 – page 017: 541 words
Staffmaster 05 – Post 025 – page 029: 864 words
Staffmaster 06 – Post 033 – page 040: 523 words
Staffmaster 07 – Post 036 – page 044: 1,113 words
Staffmaster 08 – Post 039 – page 049: 420 words

VanillaIceT:
1 post – 586 words and 1 page
Average Words Per Addition: 586 words
Vanilla 01 - Post 007 – page 008: 586 words

Garr:
1 post - 134 words and Ό page
Average Words Per Addition: 134 words
Garr 01 – Post 010 - page 010: 134 words

BigRickCook:
15 Posts –51,469 words and 103 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 3,431 words
BRC 01 – Post 013 – page 012: 532 words
BRC 02 – Post 029 – page 037: 550 words
BRC 03 – Post 032 – page 039: 666 words
BRC 04 – Post 035 – page 042: 714 words
BRC 05 – Post 043 – page 057: 1,397 words
BRC 06 – Post 048 – page 066: 944 words
BRC 07 – Post 052 – page 086: 1,964 words
BRC 08 – Post 061 – page 134: 2,634 words
BRC 09 – Post 064 – page 156: 6,356 words
BRC 10 – Post 060 – page 216: 3,191 words
BRC 11 – Post 074 – page 240: 4,494 words
BRC 12 – Post 077 – page 267: 3,344 words
BRC 13 – Post 081 – page 298: 5,674 words
BRC 14 – Post 085 – page 339: 6,547 words
BRC 15 – Post 092 – page 427: 12,462 words

Aznable:
2 Posts - 1,613 words and 3 Ό pages
Average Words Per Addition: 806 words
Aznable 01 - Post 018 – page 018: 1,021 words
Aznable 02 - Post 020 – page 021: 592 words

Ryu:
15 Posts – 62,019 words and 124 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 4,429 words
Ryu 01 - Post 022 – page 025: 700 words
Ryu 02 – Post 027 – page 031: 2,419 words
Ryu 03 – Post 040 – page 050: 2,591 words
Ryu 04 – Post 047 – page 064: 998 words
Ryu 05 – Post 051 – page 078: 5,030 words
Ryu 06 – Post 055 – page 096: 2,232 words
Ryu 07 – Post 058 – page 111: 5,490 words
Ryu 08 – Post 062 – page 140: 6,148 words
Ryu 09 – Post 065 – page 168: 8,192 words
Ryu 10 – Post 071 – page 221: 4,397 words
Ryu 11 – Post 075 – page 248: 7,081 words
Ryu 12 – Post 079 – page 278: 3,947 words
Ryu 13 – Post 083 – page 313: 5,382 words
Ryu 14 – Post 086 – page 355: 7,412 words
Ryu 15 – Post 093 – page 447:

Mora:
13 Posts –59,656 words and 119 Ό pages
Average Words Per Addition: 4,588 words
Mora 01 - Post 034 – page 041: 557 words
Mora 02 - Post 041 – page 054: 671 words
Mora 03 – Post 046 – page 063: 909 words
Mora 04 – Post 049 – page 068: 2,165 words
Mora 05 – Post 056 – page 100: 2,972 words
Mora 06 – Post 059 – page 121: 2,885 words
Mora 07 – Post 067 – page 205: 3,496 words
Mora 08 – Post 072 – page 229: 4,847 words
Mora 09 – Post 076 – page 260: 4,429 words
Mora 10 – Post 080 – page 284: 7,026 words
Mora 11 – Post 084 – page 322: 8,698 words
Mora 12 – Post 088 – page 368: 14,260 words
Mora 13 – Post 090 – page 404: 6,741 words

Karim:
4 Posts – 4,743 words and 9 ½ pages
Average Words Per Addition: 1,185 words
Karim 01 – Post 044 – page 059: 1,159 words
Karim 02 – Post 054 – page 094: 1,028 words
Karim 03 – Post 069 – page 213: 1,289 words
Karim 04 – Post 073 – page 238: 1,267 words

Magik:
6 Posts –23,613 words and 47 Ό pages
Average Words Per Addition: 3,935 words
Magik 01 – Post 045 – page 061: 569 words
Magik 02 – Post 078 – page 273: 2,821 words
Magik 03 – Post 082 – page 307: 3,757 words
Magik 04 – Post 086 – page 349: 3,544 words
Magik 05 – Post 089 – page 392: 6,469 words
Magik 06 – Post 091 – page 415: 6,453 words

Omni:
5 Posts – 28,413 words and 57 pages
Average Words Per Addition: 5,682 words
Omni 01 – Post 050 – page 072: 3,091 words
Omni 02 – Post 057 – page 104: 3,517 words
Omni 03 – Post 060 – page 126: 4,962 words
Omni 04 – Post 063 – page 150: 3,255 words
Omni 05 – Post 066 – page 181: 13,588 words

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Well, that's everything I have so far. I am, far as I'm concerned, completed with the editing procedures.

I'd like to give myself a very special EDITOR OF THE YEAR AWARD for taking the limited free time I had to complete a task of this magnitude knowing well I wasn't going to get any money or anything for doing it.

Thank you all for bearing with me and my HUNDREDS of posts in this topic.

[John Mora]

Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

MANLOVE FETISH?!?!

[kicks over a trashcan in anger]

[manlove comes flying out]