My novel - PLEASE READ

[DBtheProdigy]

Im writing a novel called the Ex-Abortion. Well as i was writing it i thought to myself (no not a wonderful world). I thought i could make a game but it got all jaked up. So heres the story MHHHMMMM------ When a baby had developed in a womens woum the U.S was in a scientific break through. This women was one of the scientists wifes and the child had been aborted 8 years before the turn of the century. A virus breaks out from DNA cloning and biogenetic tests. Robots thats the humans built reacted to the virus the humans had also reacted getting a life sucking cancer and would be killed from it in hours. In the robots it invaded their systems and turning them loose-mindedly to destroy whatever. 99.9% of earths population is killed leaving a mear 200,000 people 1 of which the scientist of the wife (she died). The scientists thinks to himself what have i done, being a very smart man he thought to himself i may not be able to stop this from happening again but i can make the this problem smaller. Now at the turn time machines had been under testing. Now the scientist had gone back in time and stoped the abortion hoping his son would be able to have a cure for this virus. Well i wont tell what happens but if u want to feel free to warp this novel and make it a game

[Wavelength]

Re: My novel - PLEASE READ

I'll pass on this one.

[hitogoroshi]

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Wait...robots reacted to a virus?

[jvrlopez]

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If it's written like you type your posts, it'll be a huge pain to read.

[Perversion]

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I wonder if Grims is vying for simple man's place.

[Stormy]

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no comment

[simple man]

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Make proper grammar!

[DBtheProdigy]

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Well yes i donty have all that grammar crap on the internet so on my computer its all correct! Also the robots arent reactivatde they just get all messed up and go haywire!!!

[Libby]

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I would definately put this on my "Don't Read" list.


And it's a long list, so you won't feel lonely next to Stephan King and Christian "How-To" books.

*awaits her neg rep..*

[JPS]

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Make proper grammar!

lulz Simple tot'lly pwn'd sum1


EDIT: let me get this straight, I just reread your post, you want someone to make this game for you?

[Perversion]

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Another reason I think he's vying for simple man's place....simple wanted someone to make his game for him, too.

[MagusMartovich]

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Okay, I'm prolly gonna get burned from so many people on this one, but why even post "No Comment" if you have nothing to say? See, I tread my way through the horrid grammar and found that I totally disagree with not only the topic, but also the thought process. I'll come right out and say it:

1) NO ONE will make this game except for yourself

2) I WILL NOT play this game

3) I TOTALLY disagree with the way that you think

4) I KNOW I'm not alone

[JPS]

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wow 8^o

[Ivan Rosenguard]

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Okay, I'm prolly gonna get burned from so many people on this one, but why even post "No Comment" if you have nothing to say? See, I tread my way through the horrid grammar and found that I totally disagree with not only the topic, but also the thought process. I'll come right out and say it:

1) NO ONE will make this game except for yourself

2) I WILL NOT play this game

3) I TOTALLY disagree with the way that you think

4) I KNOW I'm not alone

Hear-Hear!

[simple man]

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IS this with rpgm 3?

Because the game would SUCK!