Lyrical Assassin, My Abecedarian (Update: 2/29/08)

[Bon]

All right, it's the start of this rap
Becoming one with the beat, so all my people just
Clap; my lyrics bring mass
Destruction
Everybody gets scared
Fearing that my delivery makes you lose your hair
Gallantry is my credo
Having none is a drag
I'm
Journeying through this style
Keeping cool when I brag
Lyrical lacerations
Making good on my word
Never battle assassins
Overated? Absurd.
Praying that I will finish
Quivering at my speech
Reaching 'round for a
Savior that is equal to me
Try your luck, but you fail
Undefeated, my streak
Very keen is the lyricism Bonanza speaks
Wallow now in despair
X marked in your skin
You may try hard to beat me
Zero chance you will win.

[highwind]

Re: Lyrical Assassin, My Abecedarian.

i like that you're using bigger words.

try to play with some internal rhyme schemes too.

[Bon]

Re: Lyrical Assassin, My Abecedarian.

It's about damn time someone responded.

+rep.

Thanks, High.

[Bon]

Re: Lyrical Assassin, My Abecedarian (Update: 2/29/08)

Bump.

I finally made my abecedarian into an open collaboration song.

Check it here: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=6317861

I also have some new songs up, so please, feedback is highly appreciated.

[DarkwingChuck]

Re: Lyrical Assassin, My Abecedarian (Update: 2/29/08)

Music is one of those things I can't judge because I'm impressed by anything that's way beyond what I can do. And just like art I can't do ****e when it comes to music. So it might not mean much coming from me but I like it. Especially The Reaction.