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    CORE Chaos: The Awakening~ A Story

    Well, to tell you guys, Cifer: The Awakening is based off of an incomplete short story of mine... Well, here's Chapter 1...

    You call me insane, a maniac hell-bent on bringing down a system that never existed. Well, I'll tell you everything. Of how I didn't kill Cutley, that bastard. It was divine intervention.
    It was a misty day in England. After watching the news of the recent takeover of the Holy Land (not like I cared), I set off for my job. My business, known as the Pentagon, didn't have any work to be done. I had found a man, James Cutley, in the tabloids who needed my help. He was a rich man, recieving death threats from an unknown source. The letter had said,
    IT IS TIME. YOU WILL DIE IN THE MINES...

    More to come.
    Snake?...Snake?SNAKE!!!

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    Re: CORE Chaos: The Awakening~ A Story

    I'm gonna need more than a few sentences to offer up a proper critique.

    I can however note that what's here didn't catch my interest in the slightest.

    And you spelled receiving incorrectly.
    "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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