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    need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

    before i get into the help portion of this that i need id like to show off some of what i have made.

    lobby of the future portion of my game

    the black stuff that didnt show up is the pulsing background. its meant to be like a bullet proof force shield or something.

    "dieing" trees in front of a tower

    does it really look as bad as it does right now?

    cafeteria of the futuristic part of my game

    up top is the arcade games where you can play 3 games (one machine is broken) the games will be sim date, castlevania special edition , and a racing game. wish me luck on having enough memory to do it. below it is the computer graphic i made as well as the desk top i designed to hold it.

    security room

    how does it look? the lower part is "cracked z alloy glass," a broken version of plexiglass i guess. the big monstrosity is meant to be a super computer. how does it look? does it even look close to that?

    a kind of brief vid of my port town
    http://www.nightmareknights.com/game...s/MVI_0311.AVI

    continuation of said port town
    http://www.nightmareknights.com/game...s/MVI_0312.AVI


    now onto the sim game which i am having problems. first some pictures and videos which ill use as demonstration.

    the intro to the sim game, full avi (15 seconds or so long)
    http://www.nightmareknights.com/game...s/MVI_0304.AVI
    do you like the animation so far? (i know it isnt a lot)

    a clip of the next part but where he gets out of the car (5 seconds long i think)
    http://www.nightmareknights.com/game...s/MVI_0306.AVI
    tell me if you think it works or if its absurd (car and human size).


    dance hall


    park


    bar


    beach


    room


    clock



    the game starts off with suave enricka (forgot the spelling already), who is a player, a ladies man. your job is to get into the bed of the ladies. there is 6 random chicks, a pedo chick (age 17) who your goal here is to not sleep with her, to a porn dancer who you can score points for not sleeping with her (raise your standards fellas), to a workaholic, a native chick, to a short chick whos sensitive about her height, and a 6th who i am pulling a blank and will have to get back to you on that.

    you choose your own adventure, scoring points for each correct thing you say that will get you inside their pants. at the end of the night, providing you have given them the date of their dreams, they may sleep with you earning you a prize. you choose every step of the way, choosing from three places to eat, and to three places to go after dinner. each place has its own unique points and dialog to score with and some places will not be the right places for your dates.

    my problem is ive hit a road block. i cant seam to develop dialog or story for any type of senario so ive turned to you. help me develop their stories where ever you can. give me ideas of what could happen at each step, what types of things to add. i really need to do this cheaply for space but if i get pinched ill push some things out or move the game to the 3rd senario card.
    Last edited by Karr Lord of Chaos; 02-04-2008, 02:44 AM.

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    Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

    Wow thats a small car, game looks good, but Im also bad on dialogue...

    Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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      #3
      Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

      just give me ideas, ill be forming it into dialog. it helps me a lot more if i have a direction to shoot for rather then try to drum up good content on the spot. its going to be a jumbled mess when its finished so i rather get it done right the first shot.

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        #4
        Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

        Check your PM

        Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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          #5
          Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

          thanks sugar

          Thank you Ωbright for the sig fix!
          Card Three is released! You can find it here!

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            #6
            Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

            no prob

            Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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              #7
              Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

              Where's the pizza place and the bowling alley?

              "Couch co-op is the only true co-op." Richard of the Cooks.

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                #8
                Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

                Originally posted by PostulateMan View Post
                Where's the pizza place and the bowling alley?
                adult content so i figured adult places to pick up chicks. when was the last time going bowling got you laid?

                Thank you Ωbright for the sig fix!
                Card Three is released! You can find it here!

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                  Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

                  Here's a good idea: trying to figure out if the few, more slightly off chicks that are relatively easier to pick up are sane enough to not try to kill you in your sleep if you spend the night- the first difficulty levels are fairly easy to figure them out, but the later ones have interwoven dialogue and occurences/interactions with people that provide subtle hints she might try to kill you when you sleep with her, and it's game over.

                  There's tons of stuff you can do with this. Oh- and try to make it more "Japanese Game Date Sim"-like

                  "Super High Score Virgin Girl Challenge Bonus!!" -make lots of big, colorful VFX with this.

                  note: I've never actually played one, just the impression I've gotten they may be like.

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                    #10
                    Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

                    lol you people are hound dogs.

                    its not going to be anything like that. its going to be simple and a small mini game, not a full blown game like what others got out there. i cant have two blockbuster games in one sitting. im thinking im going to have to move the sims game over to the 3rd card and develop it there rather then do the squeeze now.

                    Thank you Ωbright for the sig fix!
                    Card Three is released! You can find it here!

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                      #11
                      Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

                      Originally posted by Karr Lord of Chaos View Post
                      adult content so i figured adult places to pick up chicks. when was the last time going bowling got you laid?
                      The last time I went, since my girlfriend and I have rough, pre-marital sex.

                      Maybe in the "dance hall" you could have another girl approach you and cause controversy while you're trying to dance with your date. It could play out with a whole which chick should I try to bag feel?

                      "Couch co-op is the only true co-op." Richard of the Cooks.

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                        Re: need help with a mini game, plus vids and pics of my game

                        Originally posted by PostulateMan View Post
                        The last time I went, since my girlfriend and I have rough, pre-marital sex.

                        Maybe in the "dance hall" you could have another girl approach you and cause controversy while you're trying to dance with your date. It could play out with a whole which chick should I try to bag feel?
                        haha nice, im definably feeling a twist. 2 girls one cu.. er guy maybe.

                        geese, the more i delve into new mini games the most i end up feeling that they could turn into full games themselves.

                        i am quite pleased with how my minigames are going, even if they suck the time and energy right out of me to produce. going for non standard games is fun in of itself, gives me an opportunity to see if i really know my maker.

                        Thank you Ωbright for the sig fix!
                        Card Three is released! You can find it here!

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