[WIP] Eternal Grace

[jasprelao]

Re: [WIP] Eternal Grace

Submit your Eternal Grace fan's arts,
watch this video for some of them:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRilP2Qcfss

Thanks...

[Wavelength]

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Wow, I just watched the trailer, and it looks INCREDIBLE. The interface and features are something you guys should be very proud of.

I get the sense that English is not your team's first language. If you need help with grammar I'd be happy to look over anything, just let me know.

[jasprelao]

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Wow, I just watched the trailer, and it looks INCREDIBLE. The interface and features are something you guys should be very proud of.

I get the sense that English is not your team's first language. If you need help with grammar I'd be happy to look over anything, just let me know.

Nice to hear this,
we are Indonesians so our first language is Bahasa Indonesia, we are study Englih hard to create the scenario of this game.

If you don't mind, we'll send you the dialogues, and you'll become our professional reader to correct the mistakes in the grammar. If you don't mind please PM me your email.

Eternal Grace Latest update:

*** SPOILERS ***

*** END SPOILERS ***


Wanna see more information? check it out in http://www.eternal-grace.com

Thanks...

[Ωbright]

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HOW did I miss this?

The map, the trailer, the screen caps...everything looks fantastic. Keep up the good work! I agree with Ryner about a lot of what he said, but it's good to see that you're so willing to work with people who want to help. That's a rare thing.

I also volunteer to help with grammar and spelling, if Wavelength wants to split his workload.

[Wavelength]

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Nice to hear this,
we are Indonesians so our first language is Bahasa Indonesia, we are study Englih hard to create the scenario of this game.

If you don't mind, we'll send you the dialogues, and you'll become our professional reader to correct the mistakes in the grammar. If you don't mind please PM me your email.

I'd be honored. I'm totally cool teaming up with Obright, too, if you guys want to split the work up to get it done quicker; he's a really good writer. I'll send you my email in a PM immediately. Feel free to send some dialogue over anytime.

[jasprelao]

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@wavelength and Obright:

Thank you very much, we'll send you email soon.

Heya pals, Eternal Grace will have facial expressions for every important characters.

Here's the example:



wanna see further? check out the web at http://www.eternal-grace.com

Thanks...

[Ωbright]

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Very nice! I'm excited about this project.

Wavelength, just send me whatever part you want me to help with. I've been at my father's place looking after him while his normal caregiver is away, and will continue to do that until next Wednesday (and will therefore be Sporaticus online for a bit), but as soon as I see your message I will begin work.

[Wavelength]

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I played through the demo last night and enjoyed it. It left me wanting more!

Obi: I was under the impression that jasprelao will split the work up and send our parts to us; if I'm the one who's responsible for splitting it then that's fine, I'm happy to do it; I just wasn't under the impression that's how it's going to go.

Oh, and... I'M Sporaticus!!

[jasprelao]

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I played through the demo last night and enjoyed it. It left me wanting more!

Obi: I was under the impression that jasprelao will split the work up and send our parts to us; if I'm the one who's responsible for splitting it then that's fine, I'm happy to do it; I just wasn't under the impression that's how it's going to go.

Oh, and... I'M Sporaticus!!

Nice to heard that, we'll work hard to finish our dialogues script first before we send it to you.

By the way,
Wanna be closer to Eternal Grace Characters? Now you can watch the gallery by clicking buttons like this in the web site (http://www.eternal-grace.com):

Eternal Grace Characters Gallery Version 1:



Eternal Grace Characters Gallery Version 2:


Eternal Grace Complete Fan's Arts Gallery:


Thanks...

[jasprelao]

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Dear All,
here is the new dialogue screen of Eternal Grace,



you can find this dialogues screen and the expression of each characters of Eternal Grace.

Check more new dialogue screen at:

http://www.eternal-grace.com/2010/11...ue-screen.html

Thanks...

[Big Rick Cook]

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I, like seemingly everyone else, can't believe I missed this. I would love to offer my services as grammar/spell checker as well, if you don't already have a full team in Wavelength and Obright. I have plenty of editing experience, though amateur, with full-length stories, and I may be able to bring some good insight into the dialogue of your script, both in natural flow of conversation and precision of thought.

Not trying to horn in on Wave and Obi's territory, just offering an additional eye. =)

[ErikaFuzzbottom]

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What's that mess of symbols in the upper-left corner of the text box? Where it's like

mLL
| |^

[Wavelength]

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I, like seemingly everyone else, can't believe I missed this. I would love to offer my services as grammar/spell checker as well, if you don't already have a full team in Wavelength and Obright. I have plenty of editing experience, though amateur, with full-length stories, and I may be able to bring some good insight into the dialogue of your script, both in natural flow of conversation and precision of thought.

Not trying to horn in on Wave and Obi's territory, just offering an additional eye. =)

I'm certainly fine with this if you guys are, Jasprelao. If you havent checked out the Imaginari, Rick is a really strong writer. I'll finish the second (and maybe third) part you send alone, in order to get a consistent start, then I'll copy the team and we can figure out how to be most efficient from then on.

[Wavelength]

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What's that mess of symbols in the upper-left corner of the text box? Where it's like

mLL
| |^

That spells out "Millia".

EDIT: Jasprelao informed me that it's actually the Revan (one of the in-game races I think?) spelling of each character's name. So Razh's, for example, is way different than "Razh" if you look at the last screenshot that was posted.

[Mcardy]

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Pretty cool, I will have to check out the demo.