well the game starts out as Virgil an orphan living in a small town scared by war (how his parents died) his older brother Skylo becomes a soldier of the armasian army he is killed by a man known as vanser frost the grand general of zeron territory he plans to join with a demonic overlord and he starts making demon soldiers Virgil wants to avenge his brothers death he sets out with his freind dizz throuought the course of the game you can join guilds have guild wars nad earn quild points for new armor,weapons and spells. Also you encounter many people once youve made freinds with them they go to the guild house you have selected (there are about 12 guilds) and u can exchange them in and out in your party. there is alos a way in the game to customize and make special weapons i have figured out a way to make mine minerals in a dungeon u coullect the minerals and go to a blacksmith who crafts the weapons for you you can also collect various elemental stones to make your weapon better. tell me what ya think rate it to 1-10 1 bein worst 10 bein best!
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Rated.
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care to explain why you rated it like that?
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Orphan of a war ravaged village seeking revenge for a murdered family member sounded way too cliche for me.Last edited by jvrlopez; 11-11-2006, 05:53 PM.Comment
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Or the first part of Final Fantasy XII.
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Interestingly, "Zeron" is the setting of my own game."What if like...there was an exact copy of you somewhere, except they're the opposite gender, like you guys could literally have a freaky friday moment and nothing would change. Imagine the best friendship that could be found there."Comment
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Well, I'd honestly have to rate the story 1/10, since you gave us no story at all. You basically said, "There was an orphan. His brother gets killed by a demon. He goes out to kill the demon." The rest of your post was game mechanics, I think. It was kind of hard to read. In fact, it was very hard to read. Oh, wait, no grammar Nazis. Well, I really hope you can learn some grammar by the time you start to make your game..Comment
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I cant rate it because I couldn't understand half of what you said, no commas, no periods, nothing, it was all one big jumbled word find and I dont have time to do interpretation.
Add some punctiation and some capitalized names and then I'll rate it.
<-Not really a Grammar Nazi, but with such bad grammar skills I couldn't help myself...Last edited by JPS; 11-12-2006, 05:55 PM.
Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!
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just make the game
no one cares about your rpg storyXBox Live: Alzar2k
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Let's see if I can translate it.Didn't help that there were also some typos in that mess. Along with "u" instead of "you". Lazy typist. No, wait, there's only half-laziness, because sometimes "you" was used.Well, the game starts out with Virgil, an orphan living in a small town scarred by war (which his parents died because of). His older brother, Skylo, becomes a soldier of the Armasian Army, and is killed by a man known as Vanser Frost, the grand general of Zeron Territory. He plans to join with a demonic overlord and starts making demon soldiers. Virgil wants to avenge his brother's death. He sets out with his freind, Dizz.
Throughout the course of the game, you can join guilds, have guild wars, and earn guild points for new armor, weapons and spells. Also, you encounter many people who can become allies. Once you've made friends with them, they go to the guild house you chose (there are about 12 guilds) and you can exchange them in and out of your party. There is also a way in the game to customize and make special weapons. I have figured out a way to mine minerals. In a dungeon, you collect the minerals, and go to a blacksmith who crafts the weapons for you. You can also collect various elemental stones to make your weapon better.
Tell me what ya think. Rate it to 1-10, with 1 being worst and 10 being best!"What if like...there was an exact copy of you somewhere, except they're the opposite gender, like you guys could literally have a freaky friday moment and nothing would change. Imagine the best friendship that could be found there."Comment
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Kinda cliche... yes... but I haev seen worse in popular games.
3/10.
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This path--the only one now remaining--has been entered upon by me; and I flatter myself that I have, in this way, discovered the cause of--and consequently the mode of removing--all the errors which have hitherto set reason at variance with itself, in the sphere of non-empirical thought. I have not returned an evasive answer to the questions of reason, by alleging the inability and limitation of the faculties of the mind; I have, on the contrary, examined them completely in the light of principles, and, after having discovered the cause of the doubts and contradictions into which reason fell, have solved them to its perfect satisfaction. It is true, these questions have not been solved as dogmatism, in its vain fancies and desires, had expected; for it can only be satisfied by the exercise of magical arts, and of these I have no knowledge. But neither do these come within the compass of our mental powers; and it was the duty of philosophy to destroy the illusions which had their origin in misconceptions, whatever darling hopes and valued expectations may be ruined by its explanations. My chief aim in this work has been thoroughness; and I make bold to say that there is not a single metaphysical problem that does not find its solution, or at least the key to its solution, here. Pure reason is a perfect unity; and therefore, if the principle presented by it prove to be insufficient for the solution of even a single one of those questions to which the very nature of reason gives birth, we must reject it, as we could not be perfectly certain of its sufficiency in the case of the others.Last edited by Garr123; 11-15-2006, 02:20 AM."At first it just looked like a picture of a bunch of lily pads, but then I started scraping at it with my pocket knife and the whole painting just sort of spoke to me," Schmidt said. "For the first time, I finally understand what Monet was trying to get across in her work."Comment
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Unoriginal, uninspired, under-developed, uncannily boring, undertaker.
AND THE ORPHAN CAN GO BY A PSEUDONYM. LET'S SAY, JUST FOR KICKS, UNDERHILL!"Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - SampsonComment
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You are all too mean.
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When Zarathustra was alone, however, he said to his heart: "Could it be possible! This old saint in the forest hath not yet heard of it, that GOD IS DEAD!"
Last edited by Garr123; 11-15-2006, 02:20 AM."At first it just looked like a picture of a bunch of lily pads, but then I started scraping at it with my pocket knife and the whole painting just sort of spoke to me," Schmidt said. "For the first time, I finally understand what Monet was trying to get across in her work."Comment
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