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Czechs Mex
03-27-2005, 06:31 PM
Okay, I make no claims to be a poet, but I thought I'd share with you some stuff I found on my computer. Mock me, love me, read it or don't. Do what you wish with this topic. If feedback is good maybe I'll post more.

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Devotion

She takes him by the wrists and soaks his dirty hands
In gasoline.
She massages the broken lines on his palms,
retraces the scars she buried there.

She curls her nails underneath his,
Scrapes the layered earth
From his fingertips,
Plucks each singed hair from his knuckles.

She remembers these shapes.
They hold her pure.

She outlines his face,
Presses against his chest,
Extends her hands.

His calluses blister again.

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A Love Poem

When you smile
I want to get close enough
To break your teeth
And feed them to you.
I want you to taste the twenty whores
That thrust their desire
And disease into me.

When your eyes begin to squint
And your lips curl against you,
I want to see the most horrifying, clamp-jawed
Mess of gums ever to squeeze from shame.
The next time you smile,
I know you’ll mean it.

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Skin

A woman slices tomatoes.
The juice runs off the table, between her toes.
The dog licks it up.

A door slams. A man says nothing.
He slumps upon the couch. He shuts his eyes.
A dog wags its tail.

From the kitchen, a methodic thump
Drowns silence. The knife grows dull,
A tomato resists. It doesn't matter.

The skin is split, and the insides gush
Like maggots, feasting on the nectar of the dead.
The dog drools. A man sleeps.

The woman eats.

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Rain
03-27-2005, 07:07 PM
:lol

The first one is pretty good

altoecko
03-28-2005, 03:02 AM
I've said it once and I'll say it again. You have a wonderful way with describing things. The Tomato one is STILL my favorite after all these months.

Czechs Mex
04-07-2005, 05:03 PM
Thanks man, that means a lot. Here's another. I'm pretty sure I posted this a long time ago, but hey, I can't pull out 20 in one night like Alto does. I'll post some new one's eventually... maybe.

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Time Capsule

From his bed he looks up
And tries to remember
The bouquet of lilies
Leaning against his cool slate nameplate,
Frosted from the sudden chill of November.

Beneath a blanket of snow,
He sees
The brown, down jacket his mother bundled around him,
Tightened to create a full-body feather cast,
A barrier against Mother Nature.

Now he sleeps, locked and sealed,
As not to drown in the dirt that surrounds him.
Untouched and unnoticed.
His dreaming
uninterrupted–

Until he overhears the worms
Begin to complain of the stench
Wrenching through the box within.
He touches his rotting pumpkin skin
To watch it collapse onto itself, folding over
Like the worn photos stored in closet bins.

From his bed he looks up–
Through a sewn shut mouth he screams,
As the worms
Crawl up to the cool slate nameplate
Alongside a bouquet of weeds.

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