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    Here's some words I put together and am calling poetry.

    Okay, I make no claims to be a poet, but I thought I'd share with you some stuff I found on my computer. Mock me, love me, read it or don't. Do what you wish with this topic. If feedback is good maybe I'll post more.

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    Devotion

    She takes him by the wrists and soaks his dirty hands
    In gasoline.
    She massages the broken lines on his palms,
    retraces the scars she buried there.

    She curls her nails underneath his,
    Scrapes the layered earth
    From his fingertips,
    Plucks each singed hair from his knuckles.

    She remembers these shapes.
    They hold her pure.

    She outlines his face,
    Presses against his chest,
    Extends her hands.

    His calluses blister again.


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    A Love Poem

    When you smile
    I want to get close enough
    To break your teeth
    And feed them to you.
    I want you to taste the twenty whores
    That thrust their desire
    And disease into me.

    When your eyes begin to squint
    And your lips curl against you,
    I want to see the most horrifying, clamp-jawed
    Mess of gums ever to squeeze from shame.
    The next time you smile,
    I know you’ll mean it.


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    Skin

    A woman slices tomatoes.
    The juice runs off the table, between her toes.
    The dog licks it up.

    A door slams. A man says nothing.
    He slumps upon the couch. He shuts his eyes.
    A dog wags its tail.

    From the kitchen, a methodic thump
    Drowns silence. The knife grows dull,
    A tomato resists. It doesn't matter.

    The skin is split, and the insides gush
    Like maggots, feasting on the nectar of the dead.
    The dog drools. A man sleeps.

    The woman eats.


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    #2
    Re: Here's some words I put together and am calling poetry.



    The first one is pretty good

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      #3
      Re: Here's some words I put together and am calling poetry.

      I've said it once and I'll say it again. You have a wonderful way with describing things. The Tomato one is STILL my favorite after all these months.
      Grow!

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        Re: Here's some words I put together and am calling poetry.

        Thanks man, that means a lot. Here's another. I'm pretty sure I posted this a long time ago, but hey, I can't pull out 20 in one night like Alto does. I'll post some new one's eventually... maybe.

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        Time Capsule

        From his bed he looks up
        And tries to remember
        The bouquet of lilies
        Leaning against his cool slate nameplate,
        Frosted from the sudden chill of November.

        Beneath a blanket of snow,
        He sees
        The brown, down jacket his mother bundled around him,
        Tightened to create a full-body feather cast,
        A barrier against Mother Nature.

        Now he sleeps, locked and sealed,
        As not to drown in the dirt that surrounds him.
        Untouched and unnoticed.
        His dreaming
        uninterrupted–

        Until he overhears the worms
        Begin to complain of the stench
        Wrenching through the box within.
        He touches his rotting pumpkin skin
        To watch it collapse onto itself, folding over
        Like the worn photos stored in closet bins.

        From his bed he looks up–
        Through a sewn shut mouth he screams,
        As the worms
        Crawl up to the cool slate nameplate
        Alongside a bouquet of weeds.


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        Last edited by Czechs Mex; 04-07-2005, 05:04 PM.

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