You knew it was only a matter of time.

[altoecko]

(345.) Dawn
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While the day slept night slowly crept up to its side without making a squeek.
It giggled a soft giggle and kissed day gently on the cheek
But as soon as day awoke, night was gone.
Day blushed crimson, and men who saw this called it dawn.


(346.) Snide Girls
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NO

(347.) Playing It Safe
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The baseball goes flying towards the plate.
Shall he swing or shall he wait?
He waits and the ball hits him in the head.
The safe-player is now dead.

(348.) Overdue Blossom
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Like rose petals in their crimson hue.
The time of blossom is long overdue.
Late bloomer in the garden of life.
Girl with sudden bleeding, I feel your strife.

(349.) Pervert's Punishment
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NO

(350.) Bad Children
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From miles away you could hear the flesh being torn from the bone.
The shrieks and screams in a horrible tone.
What could cause this horrible plight?
The boogie monster devouring every bad child in sight.

[Redneck 2000]

Dude, those are all insane. You're nuts.

But in a good way.

[The Toecutter]

I like 349.

[Redneck 2000]

Yeah, 347's pretty neat too.

[altoecko]

Personally I liked the Dawn one.

[Dreamknight]

The poems might work with just "NO" :p

[Redneck 2000]

Oh, censored.

[Czechs Mex]

Oh, I didn't realize those were censored, either. I just thought you were trying to be contemporary. From what remains, I like the first and last ones, especially "Dawn".

[altoecko]

Ouch, sorry about that Valk.

[Redneck 2000]

:laugh!

Your title is "Title Removed".

Poor Alto is getting censored all over the map!

[altoecko]

Awww man, I even asked Mora if my title was ok.=(