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    Angel Girl

    Heres my first two poems about my angel girl, both written a while ago, but one hidden away for a few months. I'll probably have one more soon. I just need to write it down.

    Angel

    I stand by a beautiful angel
    Cursed to the wretched earth
    Meant to live a life divine
    Stuck in misery since her birth

    She seems always happy,
    and full of joy
    Unknowingly loved
    by a human boy

    The demons come
    And are fought away
    She shall live
    To another day

    But the boy he worries
    For the angel girl
    To keep her happy
    He would give the world...


    And the second:

    A tear falls
    With a rain drop
    The clouds move quickly in
    The laughter stops
    Everyone watches
    Even the sky knows an angel has fallen

    Taking all
    And giving none
    She lived a life divine
    And now the cries
    Fill the air above
    Even the kids know an angel has fallen

    Thunder booms
    The rain pours down
    A boy sits all alone
    He drops a tear
    A howl echoes out
    Even the wolves know the angel has fallen

    All alone
    Free from the world
    He mourns the angel's pain
    He feels her warmth
    He hears her cries now

    The boy cries alone, his angel has fallen
    Last edited by Zieg Rauros; 06-26-2006, 11:35 PM.

    #2
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    Wow... That's really good poetry. Why did you hid one away for a few months?

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      #3
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      Those are quite good, however, I'm pretty sure that in the first one, "retched" should be "wretched."
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        #4
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        Unless the earth was throwing up.

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          #5
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          Right.
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            #6
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            I just noticed a question was asked... I hid it away cause the event that I wrote it about was kinda harsh for me... I didn't feel like sharing it at all.

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