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    I don't know what this is.

    Passed By

    The story of three early twenty-something guys who realize that they’re youth has passed them by. The story is about how these guys realize that they aren’t young any more. They no longer fit into that world. They realize that they are past due for graduation and getting on with they’re lives but they find that they are still in college and in a social rut. The female population their age has moved on to guys with jobs and careers and wanting to start families, while they have moved past the female population that they aim for. They are not cool any more; they aren’t into all the good things. All they do is smoke weed and drink beers and talk about times gone by. The rules of dating no longer apply as things have changed already with the incoming generation. One is resigned to his fate of being a bum on some girl. One is in denial thinking that he is still in his prime and on top of his game. And one is disgusted with the future he sees (he is two years younger. Bob 23, Larry 22, Nick 21)

    Nick’s brother is married has already been promoted at his job (which he had already had by the time he was 21 and just moved into his first house)

    Nick’s father lives in his own rut. Nick’s father is an alcoholic chain smoking mail man. He goes to work and comes home and drinks and smokes and watches TV.

    Nick grows up and moves out of the apartment, he gets his **** together and leaves. Possibly he gets the girl. An older girl. He starts running and quits smoking.

    At the end Nick has to look back at the two friends he left, Bob who continues stationed on the couch, having long since quit school and works part time at some local recreational venue, mini golf or amusement park. Maybe he actually does work at a golf course.

    Bob hasn’t given up hope; he’s just given up his previous plans. He is content to live his life like it currently is. Party on the weekends, work during the weak, living in an apartment without steady girlfriend. Bob is actually a fun loving guy and a really party animal.
    The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.


    #2
    Re: I don't know what this is.

    I don't know what that is either. Tell me more, so that we might see what this is.
    Last edited by pinkymadigan; 03-02-2005, 08:54 AM.
    Took me 15 minutes to remember how to change my signature, and this is all I came up with.

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      #3
      Re: I don't know what this is.

      That's all I got, after that point I passed out.
      The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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        #4
        Re: I don't know what this is.

        Which one are you?
        "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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          #5
          Re: I don't know what this is.

          The one that's named after me.
          The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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            #6
            Re: I don't know what this is.

            Oh yeah, your name is Larry.

            :b

            Nick.
            "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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              #7
              Re: I don't know what this is.

              Shh, don't tell anyone.

              I actually like this idea. I might work on it. But I had a genius idea of doing a story about a guy who's a dick and then he becomes paralysed so he has to like open up to people. I would want people to hate him but balance it out with a story of humility and redemption. If that makes sense.

              Oh snap, I wonder if I should just post all my screenplay ideas/
              Last edited by IRC; 03-03-2005, 02:14 AM.
              The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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                #8
                Re: I don't know what this is.

                Well, I did enjoy what you had so far. A bit angst-filled, but I'm sure it will balance out with a bit crude humor.

                I give it 3 out of 4 bronx cheers.
                The unnecessary felling of a tree, perhaps the growth of centuries, seems to me a crime little short of murder." ~ Thomas Jefferson

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                  #9
                  Re: I don't know what this is.

                  Yeah, it is a bit angsty, I have to get rid of at least half the angst.
                  The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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