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    caveman is still alive behind those robot eyes

    ..see through my anxieties & insecurities,
    rip out my insides, put 'em on display.
    enraged, encaged and break the bottle that i've become.
    i run, i jump, i grow completely shattered fractured,
    captured, glad i had the chance to be so helpless.

    see through my four-cornered window pane, so plain & simple.
    brain is crippled walking through a maze.
    when did i decide to be an object of reflection?
    crucified for all my imperfections,
    i answered every question..
    peeling the tint off my confession.

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    Re: caveman is still alive behind those robot eyes

    I really like the first and last lines.

    The middle parts didn't grab me so much.

    But I don't dislike it.

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      Re: caveman is still alive behind those robot eyes

      I thought it was neat. Lacked structure and seemed mostly incoherent emo-babble, but it was still kind of nice.
      "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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