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    Melancholy Undergrowth

    Any comments would be gladly welcomed.

    (478.) Melancholy Undergrowth
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    In the broken glass
    Jesus walked and cut his feet
    They laughed almost
    But thought otherwise when he glared at them
    The cement slightly burned his soul
    Defiled by the melancholy undergrowth of hate
    We thought about this in the discord white room
    The path was now covered in his blood
    Should we blindly lead him once again
    Away from the Stairs
    Or should we walk into the blender ala puree
    It is of no consellation
    We dropped the crane
    Jesus smiled for a second
    The three-pronged claws were slick
    He fell again
    Resting next to a plushie Budha
    We tried again
    Our hands were bleeding
    The rolex caught my eye
    I had one quarter of salvation left
    I bought a Wal-Mart brand rootbeer
    It'll taste good in hell
    Bill offered me another soul
    I accepted
    I used to to play the only game I win
    Everytime
    I put it in
    It gave me 4 pieces of myself
    I bought a stick of gum
    Budha laughed
    The witchdoctor began to hum
    3 parts of my second soul
    The devil walked up
    Said he'd give me $100
    He held monopoly money
    it was tempting
    I sent him packing
    The white-washed glassdoor slid open
    She greeted another person
    Checked there things
    Their shirt said slut
    My cell phone rang
    Satan again
    I said not now
    3 parts still unspent
    A Christian began preaching to the cash register
    Jesus joined Budha in laughing
    I opted for a sticky ball of goo
    It smelled of hell
    It glooped like heaven
    Nothing but Purg
    2 pieces left
    The sandy beech of black and yellow
    Sun rose, sun fell, sun die
    Lucky triple 777's hot damn,
    5 quarters
    I paid Bill back
    He seemed eager to accept
    1 part
    Younger days of silent
    Her hair was reddish blonde
    Strawberry I heard it described
    I missed her
    With my Batman suite I came to her door
    She was a fairy
    Her sister a witch
    Which witch?
    The evil witch
    Wicked Witch of the West which had a green face
    And such deliscious apples
    I bet they have grown proper
    I have grown quite unright
    Jesus shakes his head in disagreement
    Budha laughs as Muhamed tries to stab him to no avail
    I think I'll keep my quarter
    Grow!

    #2
    Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

    Nonsense.

    Unless I'm looking hard enough.

    This is way too deep.

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      #3
      Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

      Is that a really bad thing? Only 1 comment?
      Grow!

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        #4
        Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

        I think it's really pretentious, you're trying too hard.
        sig removed due to banned words being in playlist.

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          #5
          Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

          I wrote it in 3 minutes and it started a poem about Jesus getting taking a lot of **** for things he didn't do. I'm not Christian, I just find it an odd story about Jesus. It ended up this way, very weirdly. I guess I could see why you think that, but no, it's not meant to impress anyone.
          Grow!

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            #6
            Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

            Then it must be considered a success!
            The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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              #7
              Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

              I honestly can't tell if you're mocking me or not. =\
              Grow!

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                #8
                Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                altoecko, what you've just posted is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever read. At no point in your rambling, incoherent writing were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone at this forum is now dumber for having witnessed it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul.
                Lil' Bean is here!

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                  #9
                  Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                  Before you get mad, think of Billy Madison.

                  ~Updates weekly on Sundays~

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                    #10
                    Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                    He didn't get it.
                    Lil' Bean is here!

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                      #11
                      Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                      What do you mean I did't get it? I just saw the topic for the first time since the last time I replied. I don't think it's very funny, but I get it.
                      Grow!

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                        #12
                        Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                        I had to make the reference. Sorry if you were offended.
                        Lil' Bean is here!

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                          #13
                          Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                          What trivial tripe
                          you've lain before mine vision
                          that maketh no sense.

                          I separated that out into a haiku, because I inadvertently created one.

                          And I'm not fond of these types of poetic rambling, regardless of time spent and your original intent.
                          Last edited by Big Rick Cook; 09-08-2005, 04:31 PM.
                          "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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                            #14
                            Re: Melancholy Undergrowth

                            Those are the kind of poems I just make up off the top of my head whenever I'm playing a beatnik in drama class. I, therefore, am unimpressed by them.
                            sig removed due to banned words being in playlist.

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