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    My Story Idea "The Toxic Farm"

    I'm a little leery of sharing my ideas with peeps like this because anyone could easily rip them off but oh well. I won't give all the details (I still haven't thought them all out yet either), just the basic idea. You can rate it if you like and give me your feedback.

    I thought about having a story in a post apocalyptic setting but I realized that if everything were already doomed what would there be to save right? So I decided to have my story in more along the lines of an "on the brink of destruction" setting.

    The introduction begins in the typical town setting with you the hero as a child living with his family. One day your family goes for a walk in the woods adjecent to the town. You stumble across a strange weed that you've never encountered before. Your father comes in contact with the weed, falls ill, and dies (in a day or two). In a matter of days several people become hospitalized and word is that more of these weeds are appearing in the forest. When it becomes known that weeds are the cause of the deaths, people start trying to torch the weeds but the weeds are unharmed. Eventually the government burns down the forest in hopes that a higher temperature inferno will destroy the weeds. Of course as you guessed the weeds are unharmed and the entire forest is destroyed. By this time there are hundreds of these weeds and no one knows where they came from. After every desperate attempt to destroy the weeds the town is evacuated. This is where the intro ends.

    The story picks up where you are grown (15 years later) and you are an inspector (of the "Toxic Farm" as it is dubbed) in a large city and the Toxic Farm has spread throughout a large portion of the continent. No one has descovered how to destroy the weeds but antidotes have been descovered for certain kinds of weeds (in the 15 years the weeds evolved into hundreds of different kinds of plants).

    You go to collect a sample (your normal work routine since you never know when a new kind of plant will emerge) in the Toxic Farm with your crew and you run into a beast that apparantly resides in the Toxic Farm. The beast is hostile and scatches you as well as kills your entire crew, only you manage to escape. You make it to the hospital in time and miraculously come to a full recovery. However no one believes you about the beast (they think you're dillusionary from coming into contact with a weed). You decide that this beast may be the clue to discovering a cure to the most deadly of the weeds (the original) but you also decide that you ought not to return to the forest just yet. You go to the other big city to seek help from the world's leading scientist (who discovered the known antidotes).

    The scientist believes you about the creature but will need support from the govt. to conduct a thourough research project so you bring a petition before the govt. which fails because they need evidence. The scientist reluctantly grants you his research team to try to take down the beast yourself. You do just that successfully and return to the city with the beast. The govt. then approves of a research project.

    That night you wake up to a horrible pain as though you are mutating. You soon discover that your strength has increased exponentially. In the morning you go to the lab to find out that a group of theives stole creature's body. Why would anyone want to steal the creature's body?

    To Be Continued.... mwuhahaha!

    Anyway that's about all I got for now lol. Eventually the weeds will become weapons of war in more ways than one. People will begin to discover all kinds of strange bizzarre facts about these mysterious weeds. I guess I spilled more details than I set out to. Anyway I'll continue with this presentation of the story when I work more of it out.
    Last edited by JANK; 08-28-2005, 05:15 AM.
    My RPGM project: Fantasia Saga
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    #2
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    I kind of like the concept of killer weeds taking over nearly an entire continent actually being used in an RPG. You could make all sorts of interesting mutated creatures as a result.

    What sort of setting is it? It seems as if it would be modern, but it could also be applied to a medieval-ish seting if you were to do this on RPGM3.
    The unnecessary felling of a tree, perhaps the growth of centuries, seems to me a crime little short of murder." ~ Thomas Jefferson

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      #3
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      This is a game I can definitely see myself enjoy playing.

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        #4
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        Nausicaa!
        "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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          #5
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          intriguing.

          you should make the different weeds usable as items. but like... its a secret as to which ones hurt and help you. you have to find oot for yourself

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            #6
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            It kind of seems like it has a funny/horror setting worth checking out, like a mix of Evil Dead and Attack of the Killer tomatoes. Im looking forward to this one.

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              #7
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              Originally posted by Big Rick Cook
              Nausicaa!
              I think that movie did slighty influence me for this story subconciously. The setting will definately be kinda modern but I was thinking more along the lines of modern/midevil fusion. You know swords and guns in the same battles.
              My RPGM project: Fantasia Saga
              Coming Soon!

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                #8
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                i never understand how staves and guns could to the same amount of damage in rpgs.

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                  #9
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                  That sounds like a game I would play.

                  You have my support!

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                    #10
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                    Maybe the guns have rubber bullets.

                    Or the staves have... stabby things.

                    Guns never do as much damage in games as melee weapons, except for Front Mission, which has a pseudo-realistic engine for balancing melee, guns, and ROCKETS. FM4 at least. I don't know about the others.
                    "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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                      #11
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                      In real life a good wack on the head with a solid staff can kill a person just as easily as a small gun could. The only difference is that there are different kinds of guns, some of which are far more powerfull, whereas with staves they don't vary much in terms of physical power. Higher lvl staves should only increase magic.
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                        #12
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                        I think it would depend on a few things. Anyone could swing a staff or fire a gun, really, but a skilled person would know how to use either weapon to kill. Plus, I would think a metal staff would inflict more damage on someone than, say, a wooden one could. Again, though, a skilled user (even a magic user) could wield a staff well enough to crack a skull or spine or two.

                        I would think that guns work the same way, too. A shotgun would, of course, blow a hole in a target. Little handguns, depending on caliber or whatever, could do anything from mildly maim and injure to flat out kill depending on where you shot someone.
                        "A tactician must never make a public apology. You must assert that
                        your plan was impeccable and if not for you, the outcome would've been
                        much worse." -- Lucretia Merces - Suikoden V

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                          #13
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                          In... real... life?

                          Foreign concepts.
                          "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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                            #14
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                            haha... sounds like theyre speaking from experience.. creeps.

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                              #15
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                              The fists/gloves are what always confuse me, especially since most of the time they just do a few light punches to the sternum. If they put their fist through their body and yanked their heart out via Dumb and Dumber I could understand equal damage to an axe, gun, or sword, but otherwise it's just stupid. I know this has to do with Asian beliefs of inner-chi-energy and 'being one with your body', but, yeah.

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