Kire does stand-up (3-10-16)

[Kire]

Yeah, this was just a warm up, I really didn't riff on anything...did this pretty quick just to get comfortable in front of the camera. For my first real segment, I'm going to riff on food, eating, fat dogs, diet and excercise for a while.

EDIT: I just decided to delete the intro because it was uneccessary, ultimately pointless and mostly unfunny.

[Red Dragon]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Can't wait for the second one where you get the comedy rollin'.

[josh]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)



DANGEROUSLY CLOSE

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

LOL, yes, I am well aware. XD C'mon, K's are awesome. Just ask Ed Boon.

[highwind]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

YOU HAVE A SUB

Also, reflection of glasses is distracting!

GOOD LUCK

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Thank you! I have a lot of good ideas for one I want to make tonight. Hopefully it goes as well as I think it will. Here's hopin!

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

New one is up! I feel a lot better about this one.

[highwind]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Hello!

The music is too loud and the aspect ratio is too small. You might also want to change the music as the video progresses instead of looping it.

Your bits were clearly well thought out and I think your delivery ain't half bad!

Just think! Ten years from now you might be good at this! (Not kidding. This is the average length for a comedian to "find their voice" as it were.)

Most of all - keep it up! HAVE FUN!

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback...and I had some editing and sound issues. Stupid windows movie maker.

[Shard]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

If I close my eyes, all I hear is Steve Buscemi.

Like Caciss alluded to, I could never do this without internalizing every offhand criticism, so yeah, keep at it. There's quality stuff in there.

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

LOL, I've never had someone tell me I sound like Buscemi, though I can hear what you mean because I do have a nasaly voice. Thanks for the input.

Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinpuuuuuuuuuut...MEGABYTES OF INPUT!!!!




EDIT: thought up a good amount of material on mortality. I'll try to bang this out tonight and edit it on the train tomorrow if I can't get it done by tonight.

Also, I think I'm going to delete my intro just because it's kinda pointless and not that entertaining...unless you guys think otherwise.

On a final note, people keep telling me I'm cute, or hot...that was one persons response to me of the vid. Personally I think they're on crack.

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

New episode!

[Armored]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Hah! That was a good one, subbed.













Make a bad one and I'll unsub. I'm a fickle viewer.

[Kire]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

Uh oh, the pressure is OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON...

And thanks!!! I'm going to be doing an open mic on Sunday and I hope to be posting it later that night.

[Red Dragon]

Re: KireKomedy (youtube vids)

I actually am not liking the comedy (just not my taste, personal opinion, comedy is subjective). However I subbed just to help you out.

Cheers mate!