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    [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

    Story

    The nine Elements. Lightning, Fire, Water, Earth, Blood, Immortality, Time, Space, and Darkness. These are the Elements that make up the Universe; but, of course...there is one missing. One crucial counterpart to Darkness...

    The nine Vampire Lords of Delusia, a great bustling city that has incorporated many other races into the area, and all of them see each other every day. How, you ask? How can Vampires walk during the daylight? For this reason, the Lords have been searching for the answer as to why there is no sun.

    That is when an evil arises, threatening to exterminate all life... or so it seems. Lord Damion and the others, with the help of the young man named Izar, must travel the continent of Obe' in order to find answers, and who knows..? Heh, they might just find even more questions...
    - ???

    Music
    At the moment, the music is generic classical instruments since I feel that it fits with the time - and tone - of the game. Once (or if) I learn how to make my own music, it will be more unique, hopefully.

    Characters

    Damion Battosai
    Approximate Age: Over 20,000 years old
    Race: Second-generation Vampire
    Element: Darkness

    Born as Haste Battosai's second son, Damion is one of the first second-generation of Vampires that were born after the Chaos War. Shortly after the War ended, he - along with eight others - appointed themselves protectors of Delusia, a previous dead city.

    Izar Neele
    Age: 21
    Race: Human
    Element: None

    Izar grew in the streets of Delusia after begin abandoned by his parents. The young boy looked after himself until the Lords took notice of him. He then began a career as their informant, gathering information on the streets and relaying back to them in exchange for a place to stay, along with food.

    Priestess Ruki Hellsing Vie Brode III
    Age: 15,864
    Race: Second-generation Vampire
    Element: Lightning

    A young priestess that was born in the small town of Kurai, she "died" at the age of 19 before reappearing 7,000 years later with rare silver blood. After discovering the Mark of Lightning on her, Damion invited her to come aboard as the Lady of Lightning.

    Arikado Battosai Faust
    Age: A little older than Damion
    Race: Second-generation Vampire
    Element: Space

    Arikado was born during the middle of the war as the first second-generation Vampire, when his father (Haste) irrationally decided to mate with a courtesan, whilst still being Bonded to his wife. This resulted in the birth of Arikado; for some reason, Haste had then on resented Arikado, even going so far as to attempt several assassinations against him, and a phrase that forever rings in on in his head...

    Lillith Desdemona von Ulf
    Age: 10,998
    Race: Second-generation Vampire
    Element: Blood

    A long-time friend and ally of both Damion and Arikado, Lillith is the second Lady of Blood (after the first died due to mysterious circumstances) is doing her best to fill those shoes.

    Donovan De'Pyre
    Age: 22,000
    Race: Second-generation Vampire
    Element: Fire

    Donovan was raised by a coven of vampires to become something powerful one day. They realized what they had in him when he created fire from nothing and destroyed some of their enemies. He was chosen to be a Lord at the age of 17,000 years. He has struggled to control his temper and remain a true Lord ever since.

    Ashlance Quarl
    Age: 14,820
    Race: Werepyre
    Element: Earth

    A young man that was born a Vampire, Ashlance is a world-renown mapmaker and traveler. His main hobby and interest is seeing the entire world; if he has not seen it, he soon will. After a few thousand years of traveling, Ashlance became infected by a rogue Werewolf and soon became a rare Werepyre. Soon coming upon Delusia, he was inducted to become the second Lord of Earth after the first Lord had been sealed away. The man is rarely doing what a Lord should, since he disappears frequently.

    Neos
    Age: 51,000
    Race: A mix of Vampire and Elven Blood in order to create maximum efficiency.
    Element: Immortality

    Neos is the oldest living member on the council, even older than the Lord of Time due to his immortality. Unlike all of the council, he is actually an artificial vampire created from the remains of a great power to rule in its stead. Thus, he is an enigma to the other Lords since he doesn't really show himself unless absolutely necessary. Unlike normal vampires, he doesn't thrive off of blood at all. He seems to be more technologically advanced than the people of Delusia due to his experiments.


    *I will continue to add more as I create them inside the game. These are not particularly potential members of your party; only important figures (though a good portion of them are members)!
    Last edited by Doj; 12-20-2010, 08:09 PM.
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    #2
    Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

    Hey man, it sounds okay. You didn't really ask for critique, you just posted your idea, so I'll leave it at that, and I won't hit you over the head with analysis of what I do and don't like--unless you want me to.

    Is the story the extreme emphasis of your project, or are you focusing a lot on the gameplay, too? If so, tell us what it will be like to play your game!!


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      #3
      Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

      Is English your first language?
      "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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        #4
        Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

        @Wavelength: I would LOVE critique. As for the focus, I am trying to zone in on the story concepts, since I'm fairly new to the gameplay-mechanics of RPGM2. I will include those as soon as I get that together, though.

        @Rick: 0.0, uh oh. Yes, why?
        Last edited by Doj; 12-20-2010, 07:23 AM.
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        The main forum for everything Reset! Here is where all of our game info will go, so check there daily!

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          #5
          Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

          Also, I am thinking of place links to the character pictures themselves. They are not original nor are they drawn by me. They are basically what inspired their characters.
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            #6
            Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

            Originally posted by Doj View Post
            @Rick: 0.0, uh oh. Yes, why?
            Just some strange constructions of sentences and articles and stuff. None of it struck me as particularly wrong, just very awkward.
            "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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              #7
              Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

              ?? Like what, for instance?
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                #8
                Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                Hey dude. It's looking good so far.
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                The main forum for everything Reset! Here is where all of our game info will go, so check there daily!

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                  #9
                  Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                  *grins* Zero! Awesome!
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                    #10
                    Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                    XD I use to do this kind of stuff before I lost my programs and crap.
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                      #11
                      Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                      Seriously? Great!
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                        #12
                        Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                        Yeah. Btw, you're using RPG Maker 2, right? The one for the PS2?
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                          #13
                          Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                          Yes. Why?
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                          The main forum for everything Reset! Here is where all of our game info will go, so check there daily!

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                            #14
                            Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                            I'm thinking about getting from Gamestop tomorrow.
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                            The main forum for everything Reset! Here is where all of our game info will go, so check there daily!

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                              #15
                              Re: [W.I.P.] Doj presents: Reset

                              That would be perfect, considering that you can get familiar with it and help me with any I don't understand. Which is A LOT.
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