I've been wanting to write something like this for a while. I finally got around to write a small part of it today. I'm curious to know what you people have to say about this. Let me know what you think. I'll try and add anyone that asks.
“Guys.” Valkysas shouted to his comrades around him.
“What?” Gloom asked.
“The situation isn’t good. We have been out here for almost four hours and they keep coming.” Valkysas said with a look of concern.
“So, you figured this out all by yourself?” Jamos said in a sarcastic tone.
“Hey, cut the guy some slack. He is doing the best he can. I don’t see you doing a better job.” Gloom said with force.
“Save you bickering for another time.” Caciss said in sharp tone. “We don’t need this right now.”
The group of four stood in silence for a moment. They were briefly resting in a dilapidated building that was half destroyed from a massive bombing strike. Just ten minutes ago, they were in a firefight with twelve Ucrans. The Ucrans are a species of aliens that invaded Earth thirteen months ago. It’s not known what their intent currently is, but it is rumored that they are harvesting some kind of life source that preserves their species. The government has moved most of the population in underground shelters, but there are some that still remain above ground.
Jamos finally broke the silence. “What’s taking Navane so long?”
Just then, Navane returned from reconnaissances.
Facing Navane, Valk asked, “What is our situation?”
“Not good. I can see about twenty-three Ucrans heading our way about three-fourths a mile from where we stand. If we stay, they will discover our position. And I don’t think we could take another battle, at least not with those numbers.”
“Then we group up and move out.” Valkysas commanded.
“Guys.” Valkysas shouted to his comrades around him.
“What?” Gloom asked.
“The situation isn’t good. We have been out here for almost four hours and they keep coming.” Valkysas said with a look of concern.
“So, you figured this out all by yourself?” Jamos said in a sarcastic tone.
“Hey, cut the guy some slack. He is doing the best he can. I don’t see you doing a better job.” Gloom said with force.
“Save you bickering for another time.” Caciss said in sharp tone. “We don’t need this right now.”
The group of four stood in silence for a moment. They were briefly resting in a dilapidated building that was half destroyed from a massive bombing strike. Just ten minutes ago, they were in a firefight with twelve Ucrans. The Ucrans are a species of aliens that invaded Earth thirteen months ago. It’s not known what their intent currently is, but it is rumored that they are harvesting some kind of life source that preserves their species. The government has moved most of the population in underground shelters, but there are some that still remain above ground.
Jamos finally broke the silence. “What’s taking Navane so long?”
Just then, Navane returned from reconnaissances.
Facing Navane, Valk asked, “What is our situation?”
“Not good. I can see about twenty-three Ucrans heading our way about three-fourths a mile from where we stand. If we stay, they will discover our position. And I don’t think we could take another battle, at least not with those numbers.”
“Then we group up and move out.” Valkysas commanded.





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