Alternate Reality Worlds

[Dungeon Warden]

I suppose this is a good place to announce my webcomic, Alternate Reality Worlds. Click on the image to go to the site. I'm hoping to get some feed back as to whether the story is worth continuing. I know the artwork is rough, I'm hoping that my style will improve the more I practice. Take a look.

[Redneck 2000]

Re: Alternate Reality Worlds

The art is really really really rough. I'd say take more time and practice more before you put out the finished product, but this is the internet so it doesn't matter too much.

It's a decent attempt.

[TechStorm]

Re: Alternate Reality Worlds

The story's nice and well laid out. Art is OK; certainly better than mine! I actually enjoyed the strip. I would say, continue doing this. It seems like you got it in you.

Cheers,
--Tech

[highwind]

Re: Alternate Reality Worlds

The way you're scanning this is horrible.

Make sure you scan at 300dpi in black and white. THEN GRAYSCALE IT PLEASE.

The amatuer drawings are only further exacerbated by the goddawful scans.

Trust me, it'll make a huge difference.

practice practice practice practice practice

[Nixon]

Re: Alternate Reality Worlds

Interesting concept. The "splash page" (with the woman on the bench, no dialogue) is designed well.

I noticed you use a lot of standard "head shots" of the characters during the later scenes. I would try to approach those scenes with a more cinematic eye... switch a few of those panels to show more interesting angles and perspectives. Vary it a little bit more. I had the same problem when I started tinkering around with comics.

My crummy advice: Practice and keep refining your work.

[Tsunami]

Re: Alternate Reality Worlds

The story seems good so far, keep at it.