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    Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

    i dont really know if this is the right forum to post this as im still relatively new to the Pavilian... anyways this is the story im working on so far.

    "The world of Aden, a beautiful mysterious land thriving in nature and peace. The gods that created the world, known as Aeons, consider Aden to be the masterpiece of all lands."

    "But Archnet, the most vile and cruel of all the Aeons, grew tired of caring after the mortals that inhabited Aden, tired of their constant peace. So he appeared into the mortal world in his full Aeon form and wreaked havoc on all the inhabitants."

    "In response to Archnet's massacre, Eltimik, Leader and most powerful of all the Aeons, unleashed all his power to seal the Aeons firmly in place so they could never leave the spirit realm again, destroying himself in the process."

    "Many centuries have passed since Archnet's brutal attack on the human realm, which has grown to be more peaceful and prosperous than ever. All this time Archnet has been biding his time slowly building up his power. In one final attempt to break Eltimik's seal, he released all his anger, all his rage, and managed to crack the seal, just barely."

    "Archnet tried again and again to break through the now weakened seal, but it was still to powerful for Archnet to pass through. He contemplated ways to escape, and tried to conceal his power enough for him to pass safely through the seal."

    "Archnet transfered half of his power out of himself and concealed it in the form of a weapon. But without the full power of a god, he was devolved from a godly state into a mere creature. Since him and the weapon were both weak enough to slip through the seal, he escaped the spirit realm, ready to unleash his wrath on the unsuspecting people of Aden."

    "Upon ariving in Aden, Archnet found that he was unable to merge with the powers he had sealed inside the weapon, and therefore he was stuck in the form of an animal, with almost no power. As such, Archnet set off in search of a wielder of the weapon, one who could use the other half of his weapon to both of their advantages."

    "All of the other Aeons, fearful of what Archnet would do, followed suit and they all pursued him to the mortal world in the form of creatures. Upon ariving, they also set off to find human partners with whom they could share their powers, and finally put a stop to the vile Archnet."

    ^_^!!
    so thats the main storyline... the battles are slightly different from most rpg maker battles, as you will only have 2 characters in your party throughout the entire game. A Young boy who controls the dagger concealing half of your Aeons power, and your Aeon Partner. The Aeon is the only one that will EVER attack, and the boy uses the dagger to cast self buffs on the Aeon. The boy will be placed in the back row behind the Aeon... and just so people wont TRY to put him in the front for an edge, he only gets one weapon througout the entire game, (The Aeons Spirit Weapon) which will have no attack power whatsoever, and the only stats that will raise per human lvl up, is Magic so that he can buff the Aeon... the Aeon however will have full lvl ups, evey stat increasing.

    anyways, its still a work in progress, but i would REALLY like to know what everyone thinks about it...
    Thanks.
    Daniel (Wave)
    Last edited by Wavewaker; 02-27-2008, 11:53 PM.

    #2
    Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

    Story is a tad cliche.
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      #3
      Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

      Originally posted by Duel View Post
      Story is a tad cliche.
      So what isnt cliche these days?

      Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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        Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

        i knowww... but that story wont appear much in game.. thats just sortof a backstory. i mean sure bits and pieces of it will be revealed over time... but they wont just release the whole story all at once. but yeah... any comments on the battle system anyone? the whole.. only one person/creature fighting thing... think it will work? (havent started making the game yet.. plan to work on it in a little bit.)

        also.. not sure but.. teh person in the back row cant be attacked right? O.O

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          #5
          Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

          Sounds like itll work

          And if Im correct, the person in the back row can be attacked by magic, just not physically, and if they can, itll be for very little, but I dont think they attack for much either.

          If they couldnt get killed then it would be very easy to never see a game over screen.

          Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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            Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

            Originally posted by Wavewaker View Post
            ... the battles are slightly different from most rpg maker battles, as you will only have 2 characters in your party throughout the entire game. A Young boy who controls the dagger concealing half of your Aeons power, and your Aeon Partner. The Aeon is the only one that will EVER attack, and the boy uses the dagger to cast self buffs on the Aeon.
            This reminds me of the character Nall from Lunar Legend. At first I though I would get sick of a character whose sole purpose was to support other characters, but after playing the game for a while, I really started to like him. Of course, in THAT game the support character was on auto, but I still think I would be ok with it as long as the story supported the concept well, and it sounds like you've planned it that way.

            One thing you might want to work on is the relationships between the aeons. Why do they do what they do? How do they interact, and what makes them tick? Just make sure that they have fully developed personalities, because they are really important in the story.

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              #7
              Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

              First thing that came to mind was (sadly) Pokemon...

              Other than that it sounds good... I do suggest you develop more storyline behind the gods though (Like Obright said)...


              "There's Nothing better than a drunken Russian singing Italian opera"

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                Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                Originally posted by JPS View Post
                So what isnt cliche these days?
                A drunken dad who must go on a quest to sodomize evil children sent by satan through a magic time portal that can seperate cells by collecting the 5 golden eggs from the evil dragon Dolzar who was sent back in time to kill George Washington so that the Illuminati could take over the world in 2008 by reviving FDR and using him to control the world through evil hell-bent telemarketers.
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                  #9
                  Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                  Originally posted by Duel View Post
                  A drunken dad who must go on a quest to sodomize evil children sent by satan through a magic time portal that can seperate cells by collecting the 5 golden eggs from the evil dragon Dolzar who was sent back in time to kill George Washington so that the Illuminati could take over the world in 2008 by reviving FDR and using him to control the world through evil hell-bent telemarketers.
                  Pure genius...

                  "There's Nothing better than a drunken Russian singing Italian opera"

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                    Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                    Originally posted by Duel View Post
                    A drunken dad who must go on a quest to sodomize evil children sent by satan through a magic time portal that can seperate cells by collecting the 5 golden eggs from the evil dragon Dolzar who was sent back in time to kill George Washington so that the Illuminati could take over the world in 2008 by reviving FDR and using him to control the world through evil hell-bent telemarketers.
                    Sounds like the next Bill and Ted movie to me... Please God no!
                    stodi no na ka cenba

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                      Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                      thanks for all your replies guys. ^^
                      1. this is nothing like pokemon as the Aeon is very much so a human in the form of an animal... They can speak and have their own personalities and emotions and such..
                      2. i know that i need to develop the Aeon's a little better.. but most of that will be through conversations with your own Aeon (who i havent named yet.. -.-) and with interactions with other Aeons and their partners...
                      3. it actually IS very easy to get a game over as i have made it so the human has no attacking or defensive abilities whatsoever. therefore, if your Aeon dies and you have no means to resurect it (no items/spells etc) then you cant do a whole lot except wait to die.. which wont take that long as with no defence 1 or 2 hits should do the trick...

                      like i said its still a work in progress... i have the first cutscene all planned out in my mind... i just havent put it into action yet.. any other things anyone can think of to improve the game?
                      (still dont have a name... i was thinking Chronicles of Aden but... that sounds really really bad... -_-)

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                        #12
                        Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                        Originally posted by Duel View Post
                        A drunken dad who must go on a quest to sodomize evil children sent by satan through a magic time portal that can seperate cells by collecting the 5 golden eggs from the evil dragon Dolzar who was sent back in time to kill George Washington so that the Illuminati could take over the world in 2008 by reviving FDR and using him to control the world through evil hell-bent telemarketers.
                        That's just a madlibs of the typical RPG cliche.
                        I want that Mulan McNugget sauce, Morty!

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                          #13
                          Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                          Yes.

                          Yes, it is.
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                            #14
                            Re: Game Idea (kindof long.... ^_^')

                            Wow, I really like your story you have so far, Wavewaker! The name 'aeons' for the gods reminds me of Final Fantasy ten, tho^^. The whole concept as the main character being strictly supportive is awesome, I think! Because I really grow tired of having normal battles, and I love when something different or new comes along like your idea! Hope to hear more about the story!
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