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    Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

    Ok. I have listened to and read about 50+ piece of advice. I think I might have something going for me on this one. The story is your clan believes in the god Raw, It is foretold that if you face down Raw and win you will get his ring, but this task is not for the weak (nor is it available to access), because he has incredible magic he is a tough opponent, there is a single arena in the middle of the field. You must win every battle to get the blade of corruption with 999attack and 850 magic attack, making defeating Raw a breeze. You must also beat the five temples of Raw there is the, Pharaohs tomb, the dark cavern, the
    Dragons lair, Orcs headquarters and the last temple Raws Fortress.
    The battle is a difficult one with out a pet and your companion lady blade( who you get from doing the murder quest). The murder quest is you have to find the card of regret which you gain when you go upstairs and face the masked fighter
    . when you give it to her she reads it aloud then joins your party. I would love any advice. Rude or kind I'm open for any comments. oh yeah Das i saw what you wrote on my little brothers post.
    Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.
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    Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

    No offense intended impcast, but thank God. Despite constant, and very patient IMO, efforts to get you to use proper forum edicate, you have spammed threads and as much as quadruple posted.

    As for your idea, its not too bad. Some of the names need alittle work, and I don't understand the logic of the murder quest, but i'm sure you'll iron out the wrinkles and hammer out the details as you go.
    stodi no na ka cenba

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      #3
      Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

      It sounds better I'll give you that. I instantly came up with a question though. If all you have to do is win this all powerful sword to beat Raw what is keeping you going to the temples? The other thing is what is the characters motives of doing this? A ring? Not a very solid reason to risk ones life. Just think on these questions a bit and come up with a good reason for them and it sounds like it could work.

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        #4
        Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

        First off storm i posted again cause my others are locked or I can't find them and thank you luasen i will get every thing done better oh yes it is said the ring grants internal life, and you need all the items from the temples to get access to the final lair. The reason of the quest is well it is just a side quest. But Raw has full every thing and yes i chose fast for levels and your partner if you beat the side quest is level 50 and your enemy you have to beat is level 45 so you need good levels. Does that help? Oh yeah storm
        i have come a long way. Not my fault if you fail to read my posts.
        Last edited by impcast95; 01-05-2008, 09:55 PM.
        Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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          #5
          Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

          Epic story plot elements.
          Screenshot Let's Plays

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            #6
            Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

            Ra:




            Raw:



            You should really stop being so hostile to people. You're not making much of an impact Impcast.
            Last edited by Seraph; 01-05-2008, 10:10 PM.

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              #7
              Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

              Why thank you duelexpert. first kind word youve said to me. This took me all of 45minutes to think up.
              Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                #8
                Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                Ya your wording is better I will give you that.

                Your story seems hollow though. Is it intended to be shallow or do you plan to make it deeper?

                Oh and I think Duel was joking.
                Last edited by lil_das; 01-06-2008, 06:49 AM.
                "Dans le veritable amour c'est l'ame, qui enveloppe le corps"

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                  Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                  Originally posted by impcast95 View Post
                  This took me all of 45minutes to think up.
                  That's the biggest problem right there. 45 minutes and you already have levels planned out for the people you face??? At this stage of development you should only be thinking about the basic story, motives, characters, possible plot twists, and a back story. It took me weeks of planning and editing before I posted about my game.

                  I personally would suggest sitting down for the next few days and thinking about the games you have played and what made them good. Then think of what could have made them better. Think of all the things you would really want to see in a story. Start to slowly add to the plot and piece things together. If you really want to make a good game then there is no reason to rush it. Do you think proffesionals think of a game plot in 45 minute and present it to the rest of the company? Well I don't know, but I doubt it. Just take things slow and think about the big picture.

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                    #10
                    Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                    What's with the hostilities impcast? If you read the whole post I complemented you at the end. I have noticed an improvement over your earlier posts.

                    And I didn't read all your threads because you made about eight of them in one day.

                    What I meant when I said I didn't understand the murder quest is: whats up with the card, and why would you allow a murderer to join your party?
                    Last edited by Stormy; 01-06-2008, 04:36 AM.
                    stodi no na ka cenba

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                      Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                      I am sorry storm I did not mean to be hostile. Das I am planing on making it deeper this game will have a series so it will leave off at a part that will make you want more. Luasen solider ( sorry if I incorrectly typed your name wrong),
                      I see what you mean... I am still working on it ask monoman I am driving him crazy asking him if it's good. I spent about 2hours last night working on it. I will make all of you proud. Again,Storm Weaver, I don't know why I posted that. I am in sixth grade I should know what to or not to type My deepest apologies,Impcast. . Oh no, no, no. You have to kill the murderer and gain the card of guilt give it to the wife and she join your party I misunderstood. I guess that was misleading.I only made 4 posts in a day. The other thing keeping you from the blade is a level 89 opponent.
                      Last edited by impcast95; 01-06-2008, 03:17 PM.
                      Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                        #12
                        Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                        Leveling up is going to be a problem for this game... Random battles are played out.

                        Anyone who plays your game will get tired of them too fast to even want to continue. They will not want to level up.

                        You should drop your levels down a bit and make sure everything is BALANCED!
                        Last edited by lil_das; 01-06-2008, 06:47 PM.
                        "Dans le veritable amour c'est l'ame, qui enveloppe le corps"

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                          #13
                          Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                          Ok lil das, I am still working on it. Levling is going to be fun becuase the variety of monsters. You will get random drops if you dont like random battels there is a warp in every town to every place. I might make random battels low%. Is that a good idea and I just found a post that helps me.
                          Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                            #14
                            Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                            But how will you level up if you do not battle?

                            If you stick to a low level then you will get eaten alive by bosses or w/e.
                            "Dans le veritable amour c'est l'ame, qui enveloppe le corps"

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                              #15
                              Re: Ok this is my final game post. all my quetsions and ideas will be in here

                              Even the lowest percentage able to be chosen for random battles still involves WAY too many battles. I agree with the above poster (maybe even lil_das?!?!) who said that random battles are played out. Unless you plan on doing something REALLY different and unique (which is difficult, if not impossible using RPGM3's default (and only) battle system), your game is gonna be a chore to play. Think about the fact that the majority of people playing your game will be other RPGM3 owners, who have probably between their own game(s) and any other games they've downloaded and played, gotten more than their fill of RPGM3's battles, random or otherwise. At least I know I have.

                              Also, battles WILL NOT be fun because of a variety of enemies. Once again, the majority of the users here have had first-hand experience with almost all of the enemy types, and probably a good majority of possible spells/spell effects. If you're hinging your game on the fact that it will be fun because of the battles, you seriously need to rethink your idea for a game.

                              Also, I browsed your new idea (I actually read the first two ideas in your first two threads, but by now, I'm sorry, but I really cannot take the time to really read and analyse your game ideas. It's like you're the boy who cried wolf) I read the first few to give you the benefit of the doubt, but now.....

                              In any case, from what I was able to gather, it does look like an improvement over your other ideas.
                              Last edited by Perversion; 01-07-2008, 02:28 AM.

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