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    OK read this one its my best

    (Game title)
    (Sorry I don’t have a title)

    In a town of Drakon is a man who goes by the name of Yaron a titan who was under the supervision of his father trained in the art of martial arts. The town of Drakon is the only peaceful town left after a evil curse was thrown upon the land. By an evil overlord named Faro . Who had been corrupted by hatred and power. He used to be the kings adviser but tried to steal the crown and the palace guards caught him in the act he was sentenced to life in prison but escaped and is taking revenge. You were summoned and now you have to kill Faro to restore piece. But to get there you must obtain the 2 angel cards a devil card, only dropped by level 80 monsters. Your companions you meet on your journey enrich the quest; you meet a, drunken dwarf, a powerful wizard, and a precise archer.
    To gain these cards you need to go through a Damp cave, a ancient temple and a volcanic trench. You must also go through a dark castle to reach Faro. This is how leveling goes,
    Yaron-Average Drunken dwarf (no name yet)-slow Powerful wizard and Precise archer (no name)- fast.
    Last edited by impcast95; 01-03-2008, 03:17 PM.
    Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.
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    #2
    Re: OK read this one its my best

    I request a mod to combine all these game idea threads into one thread as not to clutter up the forum.


    As for your idea, new guy (I'm sorry, I didn't really bother to read either your name nor your new idea), my suggestion to you is to just stick with an idea you like instead of, when receiving even one piece of negative/indifferent feedback, changing the entire game every time.

    It's been my experience that if you come up with a new game idea three times in two days, nobody here is going to take you seriously. I even have problems myself when I thoroughly think through an idea, begin working on it, publicize it as a work in progress, make a good number of posts about my progress in it, and then, for some reason, just kind of stop working on it, and move on to something else.

    Basically, instead of cluttering up the forum with every new idea you have every few hours, why don't you spend those few hours in between constructively thinking about the layout, character development, gameplay, background, plot, etc, of your LAST idea, and post more about that instead? I know you're only in 6th grade or whatever, but trust me, if you spend some time on your ideas instead of posting each new idea you have without even having worked on the nuts and bolts of it (either on paper or by using the actual software), you'd be much better off.

    EDIT:And your text has to be contained BETWEEN the [color]...[/color] brackets for it to be that color.
    Last edited by Perversion; 01-03-2008, 01:00 AM.

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      #3
      Re: OK read this one its my best

      Ya I wasn't really paying attention to what I read either... But your avatar is Altair so I give it a thumbs up.
      "Dans le veritable amour c'est l'ame, qui enveloppe le corps"

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        #4
        Re: OK read this one its my best

        Yeah i have that issue. Well i looked at this one for 2hours with my bro so im sure it will work. And thanks for the compliement on my avatar if you read my signature it knid of matches
        Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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          #5
          Re: OK read this one its my best

          [QUOTE=Perversion;348896]

          my suggestion to you is to just stick with an idea you like instead of, when receiving even one piece of negative/indifferent feedback, changing the entire game every time.

          See i have this thing in my mind that switches. sorry hehe well this one is the final idea
          Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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            #6
            Re: OK read this one its my best

            could you help me think of a name??? please. and sorry i am a serious guy about games and i take advice to heart so I will stick with this idea could you help me think of a name?
            Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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              #7
              Re: OK read this one its my best

              I don't have a name, but I have a suggestion/request for you...please stop triple posting. If you need to add to your previous thought/post, and nobody else has posted yet, just use the edit button, and add your new thought/idea. There's no need to "bump" your topic, as it's not likely to fall off of the first page for probably longer than a week, anyway.

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                #8
                Re: OK read this one its my best

                ahhh ok thank you ill keep that in mind i wont make new posts lol already got 3
                hey i haven't got one thing from you guys. is this a good game idea or a bad one??
                Last edited by impcast95; 01-03-2008, 02:16 AM.
                Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                  #9
                  Re: OK read this one its my best

                  You don't really have enought info for us to judge anything. Here are some links to other members ideas and good examples of how to explain a game.

                  http://www.pavilionboards.com/forum/...ead.php?t=9473

                  http://www.pavilionboards.com/forum/...ad.php?t=11243

                  http://www.pavilionboards.com/forum/...ad.php?t=14333

                  These are great examples of how to get your game out. They are all extrmely well thought out and detailed in there descriptions. I don't expect you to post anything like them, but you should get the idea of how to better present your game. Make some improvements and I'll be happy to tell you what I think, but right now there is nothing to tell.

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                    #10
                    Re: OK read this one its my best

                    Thank you they helped allot
                    I'M CHANGING THE POST one this on not making a new thread!
                    Last edited by impcast95; 01-03-2008, 02:43 PM.
                    Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                      #11
                      Re: OK read this one its my best

                      Perversion gave you some very useful advice--definitely do listen to it.

                      I'll add that a lot of what you've written sounds a lot like Dear Brave Heart, which in my opinion was a derivative, if not outright terrible, game. My advice to anyone whose game sounds uninspired is usually to think about which games you've played that really gave you a SPECIAL experience--then figure out which elements of that game really made that experience special for you. Those elements should be the entire 'skeleton' of your game, the entire lifeblood of it, in fact--then all the aesthetics, stats, etc., are just flesh on top of it.

                      (If Dear Brave Heart and its ilk ARE the games that gave you the special experience, of course, you should probably spend more time playing games before you start spending your time making them.)

                      I do want to say, however, that I appreciate your willingness to keep at it, and your willingness to quickly learn the rules and listen to peoples' advice. I'm sorry if I didn't give you the warmest welcome but I think you understand that we're trying to help you get better at this, and I really appreciate your effort.
                      Last edited by Wavelength; 01-03-2008, 07:21 PM.


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                        #12
                        Re: OK read this one its my best

                        I do want to say, however, that I appreciate your willingness to keep at it, and your willingness to quickly learn the rules and listen to peoples' advice. I'm sorry if I didn't give you the warmest welcome but I think you understand that we're trying to help you get better at this, and I really appreciate your effort: That right there was really kind and thank you.



                        hmmm.well remember I am in sixth grade no excuse for a bad game :{...
                        well I know what perversion said on one of my threads but I will change it
                        when I am at the hotel my mom taking us there just for fun... :}OH YEAH WHATS A MOD
                        Last edited by impcast95; 01-06-2008, 03:18 PM.
                        Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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                          #13
                          Re: OK read this one its my best

                          I have played over 250 games so I know my stuff I played one really inspiring game it was called guantlet legends for the n64
                          and counquer inspires the items for me and how I make the stats
                          Love is not something that can be bought it starts small like a seed and as two loving souls cherish the bond they share with one another only then can it blossom into a rose which in itself is as beautiful as love.

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