Poems I've Written

[11Evil Chipmunk]

I have to write poems in my language arts class, so here's a few I scribbled down to pass the time.
Btw, I'm in 7th grade, I'm not writing anything proffesional.

Blue Pen
Blue pen
in my hand,
writes stuff,
and it makes me feel better about myself.

Choo Choo
Choo choo train
in the darkness
of the night.
Fly away old choo choo,
Fly away.

Man
There is a man.
He is over there.
I see him.
He sees me.
He walks away.
Goodbye, man.

Leaf
There is a leaf.
A green leaf.
A green leaf
on a tree.
A green leaf
on a tree
that has just fell
off the tree,
never to return.

How you like them? Kinda stupid, I know.
Comments are appreaciated.
Constructive critisism only, please.

[Duel]

Re: Poems I've Written

That man is creepy.

[Seraph]

Re: Poems I've Written

Evil Chipmunk writes,
Does anyone like his words,
I think they are good

(Supposed to be a Haiku...)

[11Evil Chipmunk]

Re: Poems I've Written

This is a stupid poem that I scribbled down. The teacher asked me what I was doing and I said, "Writing a poem." So she grabbed the paper away and read it in front of the class. How embarrassing...
Poem
Poem
Poem
Poem
Poem
This is a poem.

Here's another from me:
Carrot
The carrot is
sitting by the windowsill
and I cannot help but wonder...
Why is it there?
Why is it orange?
Why does it have a green leaf on it?
Why, oh why?
The carrot is
sitting by the windowsill
and I will always wonder...

Here's another that my friend wrote:
Grass
Green grass
Yellow grass
Purple grass
It's all just
Grass.

Hope you like 'em! More tomorrow.

[11Evil Chipmunk]

Re: Poems I've Written

Actually not... it's Saturday. So I'll be playing RPGM 3. Why the heck would I waste my time with poetry?