Today's Special: Psychic Meatloaf

[Loki]

Last weekend I participated in 24-hour comics day. The aim was to write a 24 page comic in 24 hours strait. It's a grueling ordeal of a day. But I dids it. My comic may not be the best drawn, or the best written, or any good at all. But I'm proud of it anyway.

I falls apart in the last 5 or so pages, but I was tired, time was running out, and my hand really hurt. So the last few pages I just finished as fast I could. With that disclaimer in mind, here we go:

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[RPGD]

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I'd like it better if it had an additional ending. I still think it's nice, though.

[Adam Ferrell]

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That was pretty funny. The ending did seem rushed all in all it was cool.

[Loki]

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The joke is there is no page 76...

[Nixon]

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Note: I can't see page 15.

Excellent work. The 24 hour comic thing has always been appealing to me, but I am way too shy to draw a comic in front of other people.

Although you got tired at the end, the first three quarters are really well done for a "rush" job. You have a nice style (and good inking) and it is fairly consistant throughout the comic.

I thought the ending was cute, because I used to read a lot of those goofy "choose your own adventure" books.

Nice expressions and characters. I have seen other comics submitted for the contest and most of them are pretty dull. I hope you at least got some local recognition from your comic shop for that.

[d2king10]

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Very very well done. Bravo.

[Loki]

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Hmmm... 15 works for me even on a different computer than I uploaded them on.

Thanks for the comments guys. This is my first compleate comic and I am proud of it. Now I can call myself a real comic book drawing guy.

[Caciss]

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Teh awesome. And page 15 works for me.

I wish I could do something like this in a day.

[The Toecutter]

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George Romero is awesome. I liked it.

[Crustyrailgun]

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Under normal circumstances I would've said to flesh out the story a little better, and maybe put some more thought into the ending, but otherwise it was quite good. But considering it was a 24 hour comic I will instead say it was excellent!

Though in all seriousness I would love to see this be made into like a series, where everywhere another student gets some weird powers from the lunch special and then starts uncovering a conspircy. With it being different people each time (The shop teacher, the student's cat, etc, etc...).

But yeah I'd love to work on a comic with you, if your interested let me know...

[The_Real_Crunk]

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Awsome comic, especially for a rushed one.

But I just had to point this out.