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    Vandal's Art

    Go ahead. Rip it to shreds. It's about two months old. I drew it when me and my girlfriend were having competitions on who could draw better. The badge reads "JD", which is her initials in case anyone was wondering.


    ~~Vandal KING~~

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    I'll pretend the "JD" stands for Joy Division, in which case, I'll pretend to think that you have taste in music, and thereby pretend to like your picture.












    Seriously, coming from someone who can't draw, it's better than something I could do, but it does seem a bit like generic anime....

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      #3
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      Originally posted by Perversion View Post
      Seriously, coming from someone who can't draw, it's better than something I could do, but it does seem a bit like generic anime....
      Hehe, I haven't added any color to it. And plus my art is what it is. Although, I wouldn't say generic in the least.

      ~~Vandal KING~~

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        #4
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        It's not too bad for a quick drawing, and even better if it's a full pen-drawing(did it have a pencil drawing under it?) But I do have to agree that it is a fairly generic anime picture. Then again, my artwork is considered generic anime, and you don't want to get me into that discussion.

        On a more serious critique, I can point out some of the places that look a bit "off" proportion wise, but it's nothing that detracks from the main picture. It reminds me alot of the BoF/DQ RPG's where the characters have the more childish features (i.e. the hands are very rounded, rather then pointed/square) and the outfit and hair remind me somewhat of DBZ. It has alot of potential on it's own to be very good (your style) but unfortunately, with the craze of anime ramming it's lovely manhood into art nowadays, it's hard to keep it origional. ^_^

        I'd like to see more of your art. It definately has potential, and I really do like it.

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          #5
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          Something's wrong with his pants.

          Did he forget to iron them? And then starch the hell out of the wrinkles?

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            #6
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            Why is an anime guy with a fox tail wearing your girlfriend's initials? Is your girlfriend an anime guy with a fox tail?

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              #7
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              JD started her own line!

              My first reaction is that it seems to drop in quality as it descends the page. I don't feel bad saying that, because that's how all of my drawings are.

              Yeah, man. I know wrinkles in clothing look cool as hell, but unless you're intimately familiar with both human anatomy and the physics of fabric, I'd minimize it entirely.

              That said, he has eyes full of passion and vigor. God speed, son!

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                #8
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                top half looks really great. pants are bad.

                try to imagine how they'd look unwrinkled. these would be lumpy and have strange curves.



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                  #9
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                  I really can't add anything, only reaffirm what everyone as been saying. It looks sort of Akira Torigenericama and the pants are wrinkled oddly. The shirt is awesome though. Especially because with a gut like mine, I see the shirt fall like that often.

                  "Couch co-op is the only true co-op." Richard of the Cooks.

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                    #10
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                    It's not too bad, but I really think you should try to find your own style.

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                      #11
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                      Don't listen to Tex. The important thing is to keep drawing. When you draw a lot you'll find a style naturally. So draw what you want now. Don't worry about finding an unique look.

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                        #12
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                        As another non-drawer I don't have anything particularly constructive to say. Agree with what's been said before. The face does look generic but it also has personality. You definitely have talent and the more you learn about technique and composition your drawings will get better and better.
                        I want that Mulan McNugget sauce, Morty!

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                          #13
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                          Originally posted by Loki View Post
                          Don't listen to Tex. The important thing is to keep drawing. When you draw a lot you'll find a style naturally. So draw what you want now. Don't worry about finding an unique look.
                          I said he should try to find his own style. That could take however long he wants. There are some people that draw and never get past aping anime. I was just suggesting against that.

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                            #14
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                            Actually on style guys, this is my style. I just didn't put anything that reads "SIGNATURE FEATURE" in this one :3

                            ~~Vandal KING~~

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                              #15
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                              I like it, you got some potential anyway. Keep drawing.

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