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    New and need advice

    I'm new to the whole RPG Maker, I just bought 3 and have a game started but I would like to know what people think of my Idea.

    It's called "Demartin"

    It's the story of Jarik. He ia an archer who just graudated from the Ranger School. He is sent to rescue 2 girls who wondered into a cave in serach of a monster to kill. He gets there finds the girls named Domanic (a shinto warrior a.k.a samuri) and Kara (a summoner) they band together to defeat the beast and they obtain a map peice. They get back to the ranger school and show the map peice to Liza (the leader of the school) Here we find out that Liza's father wrote the map. It leads to the Demartin. The Demartin is a book that when used can give anyone the power of the Devil himself. Liza's father found this book and tried to hide it but the king came and stole it. The king was arrogant and told Liza's father where the book would be before killing him. Before Liza's father drew his final breath he marked the 4 most deadly places in Garoon (the country your in) and the kings hiding place. He tore the map in 4 and sent them to the 4 most dangerous places. Each peice leads to another peice until you have them all and it shows you were the Demartin is hidden. He did this so only the strongest could reach the king and defeat him. Now Jerik, Domanic, and Kara must follow the map and bring the Demartin back to Liza who claims she knows how to destroy it.

    Comments are greatly appricated and sorry for any misspellings.

    #2
    Re: New and need advice

    He tore the map in 4 and sent them to the 4 most dangerous places
    A fetch quest. Kinda cliche isn't it?
    Screenshot Let's Plays

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      #3
      Re: New and need advice

      yes but I kind of like the whole adventure aspect, you know where will you have to go next, what lies around the next corner that whole idea.

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        #4
        Re: New and need advice

        Yeah, are the 4 most dangerous places dungeons?
        I assume they are dungeons.
        Screenshot Let's Plays

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          #5
          Re: New and need advice

          So, if you get the first map piece before explaining things to Liza, there are three map pieces left to find correct?

          Also, I hope Liza is trustworthy if she is the one who is going to collect the map pieces from you in the end.
          Last edited by Pagerron; 07-31-2007, 06:41 PM. Reason: spelling re-correction
          " I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father but by me. " - Jesus

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            #6
            Re: New and need advice

            First off yes they are duegons and secondly that's the big question is she trustworthy.

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              #7
              Re: New and need advice

              Doesn't sound bad, but I would SERIOUSLY recommend putting any dialogue you put in the game (and probably even your posts here) through a spellcheck. People tend to respect your ideas more and will be more willing to play your game if you spell things correctly and use proper grammar.

              Why does it seem the role of grammar nazi has fallen on me lately???

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                #8
                Re: New and need advice

                ok will try. Pagerron I forgot to answer the first part of you question. There will only be 3 "dangerous places" left for you to find map peices plus the kings hiding place.

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