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    #16
    Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

    That could work, but we'd need to incorporate an explanation like that into the writing, somewhere along the line. We can't just leave it at that.
    "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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      #17
      Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

      It's amazing how un-annoying Cassidy is without the ridiculous, vacillating hillbilly accent and subtextual homosexuality.

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        #18
        Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

        I told you. He is still a whiny hick in the later additions, but he's way more tolerable.

        Bad news: another instance in which Guillermo can feel presences through his arm:

        Ryu's 5th post, page 97: He paused to listen—whoever was in that room was busy rummaging through something and apparently did not hear him sneak in. Guillermo could feel nobody else coming, and turned to look at the book.

        That's three mentions so far. It's going to be a long while before I get around to posting the first addition that gives this impression, so I'll keep compiling the list of instances as I continue editing, and we can make a decision later that will suffice. I would say we've got about a month's worth of additions before this happens, though.

        I edited 20 pages today, for a grand total of 45 this week so far. That includes Sunday, Monday, and today. I would love to keep an average of 50 or more pages edited every week, but we'll see how it goes.
        "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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          #19
          Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

          I edited 20 pages today, for a grand total of 45 this week so far. That includes Sunday, Monday, and today. I would love to keep an average of 50 or more pages edited every week, but we'll see how it goes.
          That's... insane.

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            #20
            Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

            It's really not that bad, considering I got 20 pages edited in less than 3 hours today. That number will drop severely on days when I edit an Omni addition, as I'll go insane trying to edit his stuff.
            "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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              #21
              Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

              When are you guys going to finish this up.
              The Cyclops having only one eye, needed to seek shelter from the harsh sun. The shadow cast by the spheres gave him temporary respite.

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                #22
                Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                When it's time to finish it, and whenever we can reliably post additions on the regular like we used to in 2003.

                And for anyone who's keeping track, I edited 8 pages today. I'm on page 114 now.
                "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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                  #23
                  Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                  Oh, that chef! He's so dreamy!

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                    #24
                    Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                    Okay, you made Staffmaster's post readable. That deserves a prize.

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                      #25
                      Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                      Haha, I love the little intro paragraphs before each entry.

                      And, no, I'm not offended, that entry was pointless.

                      God, I was a horrid writer then, and good job on the editing, I got your E-mail.
                      Last edited by Caciss; 02-11-2005, 09:42 PM.

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                        #26
                        Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                        Where doth I sendeth thy addition...eth?

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                          #27
                          Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                          morajohn @ gmail.com?!?!?!

                          Seriously, I can't wait to see it! Plus, the next person in line should be able to read it in order to get the additions cranking out on schedule.

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                            #28
                            Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                            'kay. E-mail'd.

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                              #29
                              Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                              “I hadn’t planning on settling down,” Guillermo replied.
                              I'm guessing one of those words you planned on changing, but didn't get around to it.

                              “I thought you just said traveling alone was suicide? Are you trying to tell me you need a companion?” he said with a sly grin.
                              “I’ve heard this here canyon’s nothin’ compared to some outside the borders,” Cassidy said as he stripped off his worn tunic. His eyes grew wide in hopeful expectation.
                              AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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                                #30
                                Re: CWS Discussion: The Next Generation.

                                Yep. And those lines remained pretty much the same. I'll fix the planning line right now when I go to add the next addition.
                                "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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