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[Manji]

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[Chad]

I vote "because the puzzle is you, its just the pieces are scattered" for best line in this poem.

[altoecko]

Not a problem, glad to inspire any time I can. I like the poem, though it could use a lot of work. I enjoyed the line about distance from the sun. I'm sure if you practiced a bit more you could write much better poetry, how often do you (if ever) write?

[Manji]

i kind of just write whenever the occasion hits me. i dont really practice or craft anything. i get inspired by certain things or when the words seem to come up on their own. although, i did write a lot some years back.

[altoecko]

If you write for enjoyment, then it's all good. =D As long as you like what you write, then you're doing great.

[Manji]

thank you. i appreciate that. :)

you write a lot more than me and take it more to heart. i try to be as expressive as i can, but this particular one was somewhat rushed, i admit.