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d2king10
05-15-2007, 03:36 PM
I have finally decided to update my deviant art page (after like 4-5 years of not touching it), so tell me what you guys think:
http://d2king10.deviantart.com/
Owl of Parliament
05-15-2007, 03:57 PM
I'm playing box man right now. I like the whole style and the box man character is great, I'm not keen on the sound effects, and I don't like how theres not sound effect when you die, and there should be a little bit of a time delay when you die instead of just instantly jumping to the title screen. Over all though it was a cool little game and I liked it.
I like your 3d landscape too.
Ωbright
05-15-2007, 07:26 PM
Cool photographs! And that flash game kicked many asses including mine. I got to level 3 and ran into the wall AGAIN...but I'm going to get to 4 dammit.
Nice!
Pagerron
05-15-2007, 07:40 PM
I just played it a couple of times and got to the section where you're instructed to go to the room to donate in order to get the next code. Cool.
Nice job. The mustache is my favorite part of all.
I'm playing box man now. I love the loading screen. :)
d2king10
05-16-2007, 12:30 AM
Yeah Box Man was a rush job (I was given a week to create it, and I've never been good at sound effects). The code to get past level 3 is syrup. Glad to see you guys are enjoying it, it was my second flash game that I created.
I will try to get some more of my works up there when I get the time. Thanks for the comments again =)
Misty
05-16-2007, 01:48 AM
I was playing the Box Man game and thought it was terrific! Nicely done. I accidently ran into the spiked wall while trying to grab a falling can and it was instant game over. :(
I wish I could make flash games like that. Keep up the good work!
d2king10
05-17-2007, 01:19 AM
A piece I'm working on. Still VERY early, and I have a lot in mind for this. But critiques would be welcomed, thanks:
http://garagecreativity.com/dkseries/My_Work/09.png
I like it. I don't know much about composition, but it's pretty cool. The only thing that sticks out is the fingernails on her hand are small, it makes the digits look bloated.
Also, Box Man, level 12. Word.
d2king10
05-17-2007, 08:11 AM
I like it. I don't know much about composition, but it's pretty cool. The only thing that sticks out is the fingernails on her hand are small, it makes the digits look bloated.
Also, Box Man, level 12. Word.
Thanks! I was wondering what looked funky about the fingers, I'll fix those asap. Yeah the composition is hard to tell what I'm going to do with it when its just black and white.
Grats on level 12, farthest I've made it was level 15!
EDIT: Here goes a version with objects blocked out to give a better feel for how it will flow:
http://garagecreativity.com/dkseries/My_Work/011_block_out.png
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