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altoecko
04-18-2005, 12:39 AM
You people don't really care, but it means a lot to me.

(400.) I Shall Wait For You
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I dug so deep within you
I pushed it all the way through
I felt inside a soul that I had never knew

Our passions flared ember
For the first time on a cold night in december
You grabbed and pulled, I clearly remember

I dug so far into your body I could taste your soul
My being so deep within your warm moist hole
I speak not of sex for I need not that to make me whole

I merely kiss this angel oh so fair
Something more than you want to do I would never dare
But I am always open to freely share

Your body is a temple
I understand it is so simple
My desire for such things is as tiny as a thimble

As I run my fingers along your perfect form
I grow oh so near and your body quakes so warm
But I do not give into the swarm

I simply massage for you want to wait
In an act you do not condone, I could never participate
So I sit and deliberate

What ways may I show you to attain pleasure?
Don't get me wrong, kissing to making love would never measure.
So keep safe your great treasure

I am glad that you hold yourself so high
Hiding what you hold from mine eye
It deserves to be a treasure for which a man could die

I do not want things of the flesh
Into your womb I wish not to thresh
For your happiness and it do not mesh

I only want to hold you so very close to me
A prositute is unworthy, to the woman who has no fee
But to the dismay of my lust, will never be free

So I shall wait for you, give unto me when you are sure
That my intentions are nothing less than pure
Because to my disease of lust, you shall be my only cure

Czechs Mex
04-18-2005, 01:02 AM
First I was grossed out, then I liked it. The last three lines are real nice.

Damn... 400. You should post your first one so we can compare.

altoecko
04-18-2005, 01:04 AM
....>.>

(2.)Love's Trinity
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Soul, heart, and body, we thus singly name,
Are not in love divisible and distinct,
But each with each inseparably link'd.
One is not honour, and the other shame,
But burn as closely fused as fuel, heat, and flame.

They do not love who give the body and keep
The heart ungiven; nor they who yield the soul,
And guard the body. Love doth give the whole;
Its range being high as heaven, as ocean deep,
Wide as the realms of air or planet's curving sweep.

Valkysas
04-18-2005, 01:09 AM
your first one is #2?

also... damn, I dont know if that will fly here. I GUESS I'm okay with it, as it's an important accomplishment for you. but no more like that posted here, okay?