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    The Multi-Author Story

    I used to "play" this game with my friends a lot when I was younger, and I've seen it on other forums, so I thought I'd bring it over here to give it a try. Basically, someone starts of by posting a exposition to a story, then, other people add to it.

    Some rules so this doesn't just turn into mindless spam:
    1. You must post at least one paragraph. No adding one sentence or two sentences, it has to be a significant addition.

    2. If you plan on adding to the story, make a post saying your adding to it, then edit the post to add your addition. If someone is adding to it, wait for them to finish.

    3. Use good grammar. It doesn't have to be perfect, but use periods, paragraphs (assuming you type more then 1 paragraph), spaces, etc.

    4. Don't end the story. Keep in mind that people will be adding to the story after you, so don't end your post in a place where it's hard to continue.

    One last note and I'll begin, don't be afriad to add to it. I want everyone who wants to to add to it. Maybe once we wrap it up I'll put it altogether and post it, so others can read it. I dunno. We'll see how it goes.

    I'll begin:


    It was a sunny spring day, and David VonHein was walking through Central Park, New York City. He was on the way to a job interview- another one. For an entire month, he'd been unemployed, looking, searching, for a decent paying job. But none seemed to show up, not even for a man in his late 20's with a solid degree from law school. It seemed as if all the jobs in the city had dried up like a small, freshwater stream in the heat of August.

    He was on the way to a small law firm, only about a 15 minute walk from his small, meager apartment. Children ran all around him, just out of school for the day. The sides of the walkway were lined with colorful spring flowers, and the grass was a rich green, a rare sight in the concrete and glass enviorment of New York City.

    As he exited the park, and proceeded to cross the street, he located his destination, a pale gray building, with only 5 or so windows, and a tinted glass door. Above the door was an aged green copper sign that read, "LAW OFFICES OF GERALD R. HARSTEIN AND ASSOCIATES". Approching the door, David took a deep, full breath, and placed his hand on the door handle, and pulled it open.
    Last edited by H2SO4; 04-09-2007, 05:31 PM.

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    Adding to Phoenix's...

    Upon opening the door, the most unusual feeling came over him. It's hard to explain, but it seemed as if he knew that this was where he belonged. Trying to shake the strange sensation, David approached the small desk behind which the receptionist sat typing quietly.

    She looked up at him through her thick greasy glasses. "David VonHein?" she asked.
    He nodded and she motioned for him to sit in the velvet armchair near one of the small windows.

    "It sure is a beautiful day today," said David nervously, trying to make conversation to kill the time.

    The receptionist turned to him and answered curtly, "How would I know?"

    David decided it would probably be best to wait for his interview in silence.
    Last edited by Pagerron; 04-09-2007, 09:32 PM. Reason: inspired by Misty's careful separation of speakers
    " I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father but by me. " - Jesus

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      Re: The Multi-Author Story

      Adding to Pagerron's....

      Just then, the door opened.

      A large, obese fellow called David from his office door. He was a burlesque man with a beer belly so thick you could cut it with a knife. On the corner of his mouth was a large, thinly-lit, Cuban cigar; an expensive one, no doubt--as genuine as the box it came in. He stared at David for a moment before spitting out his cigar and asking in a gruffy voice, "You David Vonhein?"

      "Yes, sir," David replied meekly. "I'm here for the interview."

      "Hmmm...." The fat man gave a meek smile. "My name's Gerald Harstein. Welcome to my law firm. The best damned law firm this side of New York City. And lookie here--we got a bright-looking new kid looking to join our family. I hear a lot of good things about ya, kid. So you wanna work for this law firm, don't ya?"

      "Well," David replied, sweating a little. He could feel an enormous weight upon his heart. Clearly, he was as nervous as a deer. "I've spent some time looking for a place to work, and I'm hoping you'll find me acceptable, sir."

      "Sir?" scoffed Harstein. "Call me Gerald, my boy. We're a family. But first, I gotta make sure you got the chops for the job. I ain't lookin' for paperweights. You get me, kid?" David nodded eagerly.

      "Don't just stand there," Harstein said. "Come on in. Let's have a talk."
      Last edited by Misty; 04-09-2007, 07:46 PM.

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        Adding to Misty's....

        Moments later, David was sitting in a burgundy desk chair, face to face with Gerald.

        "So, tell me, kid, how do you plan to be an asset to this business?"

        "Well, sir--Gerald," David stammered. "I have a Bachelor's degree from a prestigious law school in Pennsylvania. During my time there, I had a small internship with Mr. Henry Masters, training to become the best lawyer I can be." David's confidence seemed to grow ever higher with each sentence he spoke."

        "I'm also great with numbers, which is why Mr. Masters once called me 'The Human Calculator.' I assure you that I'm the most reliable person you'll ever know. I'll do any job you tell me to, Gerald, so please consider me for this position. You will not regret it."

        Gerald looked at David for a few moments. David no longer had any traces of anxiety in him and awaited for the burlesque man to respond. Gerald reached into his drawer for two cuban cigars, one for himself, and one for David. He lit his, and began to laugh.

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          Adding to B Wire's....

          David cracked a slight smile, unsure exactly what was so funny.

          "Listen, kid, I know your Mr. Masters. He's nothing. I've spit in buckets more valuable than him," Gerald said chuckling. " And as for your math ability, well, this ain't no accounting firm, but being good with numbers may just come in handy. Anyway, here, have a Cuban."

          David's eyes opened wide, for he'd heard of the legendary Cuban cigar, but he'd never smoked one. The one and only time he had smoked was in high school, and all he could remember was throwing up in the bathroom sink behind the gym. Nevertheless, he took it, lit it awkwardly, and tried to look the part. The charade was exposed when Gerald saw he'd lit the uncut end.

          Several minutes passed as Gerald Harstein drew in the breaths of Cuban bliss. Then, rubbing his forehead, he looked David squarely in the eyes and became very serious.
          Last edited by Pagerron; 04-10-2007, 02:41 PM. Reason: originally, I'd been using Harstein but opted for B Wire's style of calling him Gerald (as he had instructed David to do)
          " I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father but by me. " - Jesus

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            Adding to Pagerron's...

            "I'll get right to the point," Gerald said, looking right into David's eyes,

            "We need lawyers, badly. We lost one of our best to retirement, and I'm getting pretty old too. That only leaves Samuel and Joanne. We need new folks to fill the holes and win a decent number of cases." Continued Gerald, puffing his fat cuban cigar.

            "Have your ever worked in a trial before?"

            "W-well, no, I just got my degree and haven't really had any real experience, outside of the school's training trials." David stammered, trying to keep the cigar in his mouth.

            "Heh, so you are a noobie after all."

            "N-no, I have all the proper credentials! Take a look!" David replied in defense, shoving a file full of papers and documents toward Gerald.

            Gerald pawed through the documents, showing trivial interest as he continued to puff on his fat cuban cigar. Sweat drops rolled down David's neck as the pressure began to build up inside him.

            "W-well... What do you think sir- Gerald?" David eventually managed to ask.

            "I'll tell ya what I think...
            Last edited by H2SO4; 04-10-2007, 07:37 PM.

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              Re: The Multi-Author Story

              Adding to Phoenix's...

              “I want to give you a little job to test out if you can hack it with our firm. I like you, David, and that’s the only reason I’m giving you this chance.”

              “Thank you, G-Gerald,” said David. He sat quietly trying to focus on his future boss’s every word.

              Gerald began to explain. “David, there’s an old lady, Mrs. Windle, who had her little cottage broken into a few days ago. She was knocked unconscious in the robbery and, as a result, doesn’t remember much about the crime. I want you to go and investigate the scene.” Handing David an address scrawled on a small piece of paper, Gerald continued, “We need to find out as much as we can about what happened because Mrs. Windle is very sick and may die at any moment.”

              Taking the note, David smiled broadly, proud to be on his first investigative assignment.

              “Come back before 5:00 and report what you’ve found, David,” said Gerald, as he motioned David to be on his way.
              " I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father but by me. " - Jesus

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