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    #1

    Plagiarism (Short Rap)

    Voice: I'm going to make him an offer he can't refuse...

    *beat begins*

    Yo *beat continues* Check it...

    Two years ago, I was just like you
    Wishing I would never come this school
    But there was one topic that caught my attention
    Plagiarism, something that my CL mentioned

    When one does it, you erase your honor
    It's a serious crime and it can really harm you
    Stealing people's work without citation
    Can get you expelled, or even probation

    When I heard this, I was scared to death
    That I'd be an individual who did this mess
    It's not worth it for my pricey education
    If I slipped up now, my future hits the pavement

    So, I make sure when I do my papers
    To cite the sources for all my courses
    I hope through this rap, you will realize
    That Bonanza doesn't want you to plagiarize.

    *beat end*
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    #2
    Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

    You make vanilla ice look like a gangster.

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      #3
      Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

      Sounds good, but the only thing plagiarism will do on a school paper is give you a bad grade



      Also your song has an odd rhyming pattern in the 3rd verse:

      A
      A
      B
      B

      A
      B
      C
      C

      A
      B
      C
      D

      A
      B
      C
      C

      /start constructive criticism

      Like I said sounds really good, but could use some fine tuning

      I feel in the 3rd verse you were going for the AABB pattern but didnt quite hit it

      /end constructive criticism

      Was this for a school project?
      Last edited by JPS; 03-29-2007, 02:18 AM.

      Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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        #4
        Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

        I like it! I wonder what the beat would sound like!

        ~~Vandal KING~~

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          #5
          Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

          Odd subject matter.



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            #6
            Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

            The beat from Fresh Prince of Bel-Air goes well with it
            Last edited by JPS; 03-29-2007, 02:53 AM.

            Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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              #7
              Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

              MORRISSEY WROTE IT BETTER>

              You should record it and put it up, B.
              Last edited by DK; 03-29-2007, 09:52 AM.

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                #8
                Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

                The good thing about rap is no matter how bad you are at singing rap will always sound like rap and theres always people that will like it

                Not saying you're bad B, I have no idea, just voicing more personal opinions

                Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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                  #9
                  Re: Plagiarism (Short Rap)

                  Originally posted by JPS View Post
                  Sounds good, but the only thing plagiarism will do on a school paper is give you a bad grade



                  Also your song has an odd rhyming pattern in the 3rd verse:

                  A
                  A
                  B
                  B

                  A
                  B
                  C
                  C

                  A
                  B
                  C
                  D

                  A
                  B
                  C
                  C

                  /start constructive criticism

                  Like I said sounds really good, but could use some fine tuning

                  I feel in the 3rd verse you were going for the AABB pattern but didnt quite hit it

                  /end constructive criticism

                  Was this for a school project?

                  Well...sorta. I was a connection leader last semester (a student teacher for freshmen), and I gave them a homework assignment to write a rap about plagiarism, and I did the assignment with them. Mostly, though, I did it for leisure.

                  DK: I actually did record it a few months back. It's on my soundclick music page. I'll pm you the link.

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