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    I got a new girlfriend...

    Hehe, yeah. After the fuss I put up over the last one, and I got a new one. But during this whole event, I learn a lot more about myself, I learn what type of person I am in a relationship.

    Ah, well like 4 days after Valentine's Day, me and Jenny broke up in a a pretty heated argument. She had had another boyfriend, who she claims she "loves" and after everything that had happened, I really wasn't affected by our break-up at all. Of course she tried to get her boyfriend to fight me but ultimately he chickened out :/ figures.

    Anyway, three days prior to us breaking up, I was sitting in the bike rack of our school alone, and I was just singing to myself "Oh Girl" by the Chi-lites, and I hear some voice tell me, that she would have loved if I sung that to her. Of course I was freaked out by it, but I was amazed that someone was paying attention. So, we started talking, over the phone, over myspace and such, and we got into a really deep conversation, where she told me she was in love with me. This had to been on March 2. A few days later, I made a poem asking her out. And she accepted!

    Here's the poem:

    Divine Waltz

    In this dream we dare call love
    In each dream contains a waltz
    A test of love between two souls
    For each waltz is unique

    As I waltz with you
    The peaceful pull of your soul
    Makes me waltz even longer
    Our waltz is more than unique

    The waltz we do will take many steps
    Steps of which we will miss
    Steps that may ruin the waltz
    But it'll all be well

    For the steps missed, we'll continue
    continue to waltz, continue to dance
    Until this shining night is gone
    And you are forever in my arms


    I'll wait for our waltz to start...
    But...
    Will you wait with me?


    Heh, when I read it to her over the phone, and she saw it in my myspace she started crying, and told me of course she will go out with me ^.^

    Ah, this poem really ain't meant to impress anybody but her, but I was wondering what you guys thought of it.
    Last edited by Vandal KING; 03-28-2007, 08:41 PM.

    ~~Vandal KING~~

    #2
    Re: I got a new girlfriend...

    You made a girl cry....brilliant.

    I thought your uasge of waltz was a bit too repetitive, but I believe you created a pretty good poem. Good job.

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      #3
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      So, she said she loved you after 12 days?

      Wow yall moved quicker then me and Jackie did(16 days)

      Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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        Originally posted by JPS View Post
        So, she said she loved you after 12 days?

        Wow yall moved quicker then me and Jackie did(16 days)
        Actually, to my surprise, I had her myspace for over half a year, and she's read my previous blogs and bulletins about how I was, and what type of person I am. I have other poems there, but those poems are in the past, and I hate the girls I made them for. Anyway, I trust her cuz' she knows what heartbreak feels like, and she says she'd never do that to me. So, instead of wating like I usually do, I just got it done and out the way, and I'm pleased with the results!

        And the way I used waltz, it was supposed to represent life basically. All the things we'd do in life, and how we'd walk through life. That could be why it sounds like that to you B_Wire. If you replace some of the "waltz" with things like "walk through life" and "wants to make me live longer" it should make more sense. But thanks for saying something on it

        ~~Vandal KING~~

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          #5
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          Basically the same way me and jackie figured, we knew each other for a year but hardly ever talked, then one night all of a sudden started and we basically got it over with

          Anyways congrats with the new girl, you sound happy now
          Last edited by JPS; 03-29-2007, 02:56 AM.

          Here I come Pav, like the Kool-Aid man barging into a funeral! Oh yeah!

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            #6
            Re: I got a new girlfriend...

            Young people are stupid.

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              #7
              Re: I got a new girlfriend...

              So when's the wedding?

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                #8
                Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                HAHAHHAHA

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                  #9
                  Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                  You should've seen the way I got my Jess.
                  ...and that's why.

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                    #10
                    Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                    Oh guys, let him enjoy his moment.
                    PSN: KingJamos

                    Add me... I'll wait.

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                      #11
                      Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                      lol

                      Vandal, print out this thread, put it somewhere, and come back to it in 10 years and re-read it.

                      Your reaction will be as follows:
                      *facepalm* Oh man. Wow.
                      XBox Live: Alzar2k
                      Playstation Network: Alzar2k

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                        #12
                        Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                        hehehehehe....

                        Myspace.

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                          #13
                          Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                          Originally posted by Denethor View Post
                          You should've seen the way I got my Jess.
                          ..... Oh yeah, real smooth operator he was.

                          I wouldn't advise doing what Den did. Let's just say he was lucky I liked him before asking me out.
                          In the beginning the universe was created. This made a lot of people very angry and is widely considered as a bad move.

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                            #14
                            Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                            Originally posted by BIOHUNTERZ View Post
                            HAHAHHAHA
                            bahahahahahahhaaha.

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                              #15
                              Re: I got a new girlfriend...

                              Originally posted by Kirin View Post
                              ..... Oh yeah, real smooth operator he was.

                              I wouldn't advise doing what Den did. Let's just say he was lucky I liked him before asking me out.
                              I now have to urge to hear this O_O

                              ~~Vandal KING~~

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