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    Lord's of skyrim

    The elder scroll's

    Lord's of skyrim.




    As you heard about the hero that shut the jaw's of Oblivion.You are a slave for a rich person in Skyrim.You have planned to run away from the heavly guarded mansion.You are gave a crude wooden Club.Not many could get out but you and a Nord named jard. A skilled warrior from North Skyrim. He will be your guide and your friend.When you have completely ran away you run into Necromancer's that cast zombie's and skeleton's around you.




    The plot of the game is about you and Jard to stop the nercromancer flood. They will summon the Lord of the dead.When you come to town you will hear people talking about strange sound's when they are at bed.The first quest is to stick around somone's house at night and see if there are zombie's or skeleton's.After you've found the problem the guard's will do nightshift.The king of the city will ask you on the quest with him.You can ask multiple question's.Then you go to the prison.And talk to the prisoner's.one is a necromancer and use's soul trap power and take's the soul of mayor's soul in a vial and run's to release the prisoner's to fight you and run's out the door.When you go outside he go's to another realm.A Guard come's up to speak to you. He say's "The mayor isn't supposed to go some where without a guard.He go's into the prison to check and he will say. "Where's the king? I thought he came with you.

    And thats when your quest begin's


    Can i ask someone to make this look grammarific?
    Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga gao gai gar!

    #2
    Re: Lord's of skyrim

    This is really Imangari or RPGM General material, depending if you're making this with RPGM or not.

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      #3
      Re: Lord's of skyrim

      There does not need to be an apostrophe before every "s", simple.

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        #4
        Re: Lord's of skyrim

        Im not making this for rpgm
        Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga gao gai gar!

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          #5
          Re: Lord's of skyrim

          1.)Unless the Of Skyrim is an object, Lords does not need to possessive.


          2.)If this isn't an RPGM game, isn't fanfiction, then I'm guessing it's an actual game? Then this belongs in the Video Games Forum.

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            #6
            Re: Lord's of skyrim

            ITS A IDEA THAT IM GOING TO SEND TO THE PEOPLE THAT MADE ELDER SCROLLS!

            the elder scrolls have many places and lore they have the nord homeland skyrim
            Last edited by simple man; 03-10-2007, 07:29 PM.
            Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga gao gai gar!

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              #7
              Re: Lord's of skyrim

              I'm pretty sure you should just send it to them as it is.

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                #8
                Re: Lord's of skyrim

                Why?
                Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga gao gai gar!

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                  #9
                  Re: Lord's of skyrim

                  Well, it'll probably have the same effect with or without proper grammar. No need to put any more effort into it.

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                    #10
                    Re: Lord's of skyrim

                    you need your title changed now, simple man. you can be banned for impersonating staff.



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                      #11
                      Re: Lord's of skyrim

                      Originally posted by Vanilla Iced Tea View Post
                      Well, it'll probably have the same effect with or without proper grammar. No need to put any more effort into it.
                      What he's saying, is just like any game company, they don't take unsolicited stories, PERIOD. They usually don't even accept full games to publish (of course if they actually like it, and it is essentially done, then maybe, but this is like a 3% chance).

                      Awesome practical advice about this from a Game Industry Veteran http://www.sloperama.com/advice/lesson11.htm. A bit cynical, but I bet you every bit true, or at least close enough.

                      Not to discourage you Simple Man, but really a games company is not going to take your idea seriously more than likely, or anyone's here for that matter. They have people they pay to come up with ideas (mostly the managers), who have had tons of experience writing stories, and writing in general, and in the games industry. So keep working on your ideas, find some writing help sites, but don't even think about submitting your stories to game companies and getting them in a game unless, they have a specific contest for that, or you're taken a couple of years to become well versed in the game making/writing process, and have a track record of very good stories from reputable writing websites or critics.
                      Last edited by thetruecoolness; 03-10-2007, 11:01 PM.
                      はじめまして。真(しん)の冷静(れいせい)です。どうぞよろしく。
                      http://www.thetruecoolness.com/

                      5198-2124-7210 Smash

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                        #12
                        Re: Lord's of skyrim

                        Guess my dreams wont come true.


                        Ps wheres the chat load up? i want to talk
                        Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga gao gai gar!

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                          #13
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                          Originally posted by Valkysas View Post
                          you need your title changed now, simple man. you can be banned for impersonating staff.
                          Just change it for him. I think it should be "government cheese." Simple man, I'll be totally impressed if you change your title to that on your own.
                          Last edited by Nixon; 03-10-2007, 11:18 PM.
                          Eat Smello.

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                            #14
                            Re: Lord's of skyrim

                            You didn't read the whole article did you?

                            The point was, dreams take a lot of work, patience, and perseverance to come true, not that they just don't come true.

                            Also, if it were that easy, everyone who completed a game on the Pav would already be a published game developer.
                            はじめまして。真(しん)の冷静(れいせい)です。どうぞよろしく。
                            http://www.thetruecoolness.com/

                            5198-2124-7210 Smash

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                              #15
                              Re: Lord's of skyrim

                              Originally posted by EvilNixon666 View Post
                              Just change it for him. I think it should be "government cheese." Simple man, I'll be totally impressed if you change your title to that on your own.
                              Looks like he just did. I couldn't fit that many words in my profile title.

                              EDIT: What the hell?! How did he do that?!
                              Last edited by Misty; 03-10-2007, 11:20 PM.

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