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    I got poems, too!

    Man, looking at Alto's poems reminded me that I had wrote some poetry and saved them on my computer... Leave it to the internet to make me forget I had them.

    So, here's some of my poems. This first one is kind of an incomplete poem, kinda made for a song.

    ...And The Weak Shall Inherit The Earth

    We're here in town square,
    See the fountain, here before you.
    Drop in a quarter and make a wish.
    And do what you have to do.

    'Cause we're not going to be here,
    Yeah, we're all going to be empty space.
    No one in this little town,
    Even notices we're here anyway.

    Nothing in here ever seems right.
    Like life lived under a microscope.
    Pressed underneath the sheet of glass,
    Choking, suffocating, without hope.

    And the weak shall inherit the earth
    While the men in their ivory houses fall
    We, the downtrodden have had enough
    The weak shall be taking it all
    This next one is the first one I wrote on my WordPad. This one was also made for a song.
    A Grim Fairy Tale

    Not for you, not for me
    Nothing is the way it has to be
    All the time you wanted to be free
    Is the kind of fate I had to see

    All the hours spent
    Working towards your own ends
    And here I am, broken and bent
    And to think I thought you were heaven-sent

    Here is my life in an open book
    The endless time of mine that you took
    All of my desires are now for naught
    And I thought that I was the one you sought

    Endings of these stories go
    'Happily Ever After', but no
    This heart of mine I had to show
    And you took it away, I feel so low

    The lies I always heard you say
    You think everything has to go your way
    You think that I'd ask you to stay?
    Keep talking like that, I just may

    Kill you, this time...
    In this heart of mine...
    Kill you, this time...
    In this heart of mine.
    And here's the last one for the post. This one's free form.

    Depression Jig

    I struggle in your arms,
    waiting for release
    Things never seemed so dim
    until I ran into you.

    Another line drawn into the sand
    Another line on the mirror
    Cut into shape by a razor blade
    That was my biggest fear.

    This time, I will not forget
    everyday seems to be made into the same
    And the more things I did I regret,
    Makes it harder to escape

    My soul feels ill
    I think I'm dying.
    Or maybe that's just
    Whenever I'm around you.

    So take your pills and your drugs
    Maybe you'll wither and die
    And leave me to be taken away.
    It's you I now defy.
    What'chall think?

    #2
    Re: I got poems, too!

    They sound familiar, have you posted them before?
    "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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      #3
      Re: I got poems, too!

      Nope, not me. I haven't posted poems at the pav before, even at the ezboard pav.

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        #4
        Re: I got poems, too!

        They're not bad, per se, but they lack a certain quality that Alto's poems have. Granted, I generally don't read all of his poems, but the ones I do read have had a greater effect on my thoughts and feelings.

        These are more reminiscient of punk songs; they read fast, and have harsh lines. This makes them detached, yet catchy in my mind.
        "Mindless killing doesn't do a lot for me anymore." - Sampson

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          #5
          Re: I got poems, too!

          Punk song, eh?

          Here's another one, this was kind of written to be a punk song on purpose!

          Cross-Bearing Idiot

          Waking up on a Sunday afternoon,
          I'm so wasted, what did I do last night?
          I think I took some ecstasy
          And I might have gotten in a fight.

          Stumble to the bathroom and relieve myself
          For about fifteen minutes...
          Step out and survey the damage, the room
          Looks like something I started and never finished

          Family's coming over later today,
          Think I might fake my death to get out of it
          I got this cross to bear, and by now
          I know I'm a ****ing idiot

          The pills have piled up
          Inside my brain and they talk to me
          And tell me to do **** I don't wanna do
          I wish it could be something like an epiphany

          So I go outside and have a smoke
          And sit on the steps, the sun hurts my eyes
          There's a dead cat stiffening on my lawn
          And it's started to gather flies

          Girl's coming over today,
          Think I might fake my death to get out of it
          I got this cross to bear, and by now
          I know I'm a ****ing idiot

          **** with my head some more
          You'd like that wouldn't you?
          Pretend you're my best friend,
          *****, you wouldn't know a friend if they hit you.

          I'm gonna go home and sleep this off
          I just might be in a bad mood
          Maybe I'll feel better in the morning
          But probably not, I guess I'm screwed

          The IRS is coming over today,
          Think I might fake my death to get out of it
          I got this cross to bear, and by now
          I know I'm a ****ing idiot
          Last edited by Riotsword; 04-10-2005, 10:10 PM.

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            #6
            Re: I got poems, too!

            Interesting, if not a little angsty.

            But, lordy, follow a rhyme scheme dude...
            Oh my god! You are so beautiful.
            I had no idea how beautiful you were.

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              #7
              Re: I got poems, too!

              Why do I need to rhyme to make poetry???

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