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    My story.

    Heres the story i've been working on that features myself. Don't instantly dismiss it because its furry, its a novel first of all and you dont even have to think they're animal people.



    Australia, the land of wonder, the great outback. All cliches aside we were founded as a prison colony and DAMN proud of it...

    This story is centered around our rising hero Hyper dingo. His lackadasical outlook on life isnt exactly pleasing to his friends and family...his father in particular.His father is the head of a prestigus science think-tank corperation. To his dismay Dingo doesnt want to follow in his foot steps. In fact he proformed dismally in School. HD doesnt have any goals..at least any realstic goals. He much prefers to bum around with his friends cruisning town.

    Recently a mysterious company has sprung up seemingly over night. The very existance of this new company is taken as a declaration of war by HD's father.
    Dingo couldn't care less untill the civil war between these two companies inavertantly thrusts himself and his friends into the fray. The leader of this company is a man shrouded in mystery, the engimatic eccentric Doctor.K

    I have a few chapters done, i'm really pulling this synopsis from my ass.

    Characters: (well a couple)

    Dingo Jingle Lingner
    "Hyper dingo"
    Alliance: Good
    Weapon: Energy gauntlets
    Bio: Has many ambitions..but mostly lucrative ones. Ones best not to ask about or he'll talk your ear off. Only bearable by a select few being that he can't sit still, has a penchant for singing and dancing at random, and being overly frank about himself and others. Generally good natured but has a real mean streak in him. He'd rather not fight, he'd rather fight with words.

    Malt Cree-may
    "Shake"
    Alliance: Good
    Weapon: custom cane sword.
    Bio: One of HD's childhood friends. Born without his vision. In spite of this he has a unique fashion sense...one that quite often speaks against his sexuality. He insists he's straight. Naturally he has the cliche blind-man power, slightly enchanced other senses. (he doesnt have stupid sonar vision though) He's rather naive and not very perceptive. Has a sense of humor he likes to joke about being blind. Has a cross tat on his chin.

    Flint Mancala
    "none"
    Alliance: good?
    Weapon: Interchangable hands
    Bio: Moved to australia from africa with his mother to ecape the dismal conditions, in just weeks after the move their house was robbed and his mother was shot dead. He turned to vagrancy, drugs and soon joined a gang. Lost his hands durning a heist.
    Last edited by Hyper Dingo; 12-24-2006, 11:20 PM.
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    #2
    Re: My story.

    You should post the chapters maybe.

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      #3
      Re: My story.

      I dunno....i keep revising them. I'm not so confident in my writing yet ^_^'
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        #4
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        Originally posted by Hyper Dingo View Post
        I dunno....i keep revising them. I'm not so confident in my writing yet ^_^'
        It's okay, we won't laugh. You never know how good you are unless you have other people comment.

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          #5
          Re: My story.

          Well..to get an idea of my writing style heres Flint's background story. Keep n mind i wrote it two years ago and have gotten better.

          http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/...e+-in%3Ascraps
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